pf-tools/pf-tools: proof reading

parmelan-guest at users.alioth.debian.org parmelan-guest at users.alioth.debian.org
Mon Sep 15 10:58:08 UTC 2014


details:   http://hg.debian.org/hg/pf-tools/pf-tools/rev/e9a9a1e54c3f
changeset: 1335:e9a9a1e54c3f
user:      shad
date:      Mon Sep 15 12:58:04 2014 +0200
description:
proof reading

diffstat:

 doc/networkfile-syntax   |   2 ++
 doc/pf-tools.conf-syntax |  13 +++++++------
 doc/updatefile-syntax    |   4 ++--
 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diffs (71 lines):

diff -r 0d83e985d181 -r e9a9a1e54c3f doc/networkfile-syntax
--- a/doc/networkfile-syntax	Mon Sep 15 11:43:39 2014 +0200
+++ b/doc/networkfile-syntax	Mon Sep 15 12:58:04 2014 +0200
@@ -33,6 +33,8 @@
 	? network6	::= <NETWORK> define here the prefix in IPv6 format in CIDR format
 	! scope		::= private|public, if private is defined this network will be ONLY added on zone private for site
 	? gateway	::= <IPV4>
+# TODO
+#	? gateway6	::= <IPV4>
 
 [<SERVER_NAME>]
 	! type							::= server
diff -r 0d83e985d181 -r e9a9a1e54c3f doc/pf-tools.conf-syntax
--- a/doc/pf-tools.conf-syntax	Mon Sep 15 11:43:39 2014 +0200
+++ b/doc/pf-tools.conf-syntax	Mon Sep 15 12:58:04 2014 +0200
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 [path]
-	status_dir		::= PATH to access to status dir (where branche file is stored). Default is /var/lib/pf-tools/
+	status_dir		::= PATH to access to status dir (where branch files are stored). Default is /var/lib/pf-tools/
 	distrib_dir		::= PATH for accessing to packages repositories (official and custom). Default is /distrib
-	tftp_dir		::= PATH where tftp datas are stored. Default is /distrib/tftpboot
-	pxefiles_dir	::= PATH where PXE fioles are stored. Default is /distrib/tftpboot/pxelinux.cfg
+	tftp_dir		::= PATH where tftp data are stored. Default is /distrib/tftpboot
+	pxefiles_dir	::= PATH where PXE files are stored. Default is /distrib/tftpboot/pxelinux.cfg
 	global_struct	::=	PATH for accessing to storable global configuration. Default is /var/lib/pf-tools/global_struct.stor
 	deploy_docroot	::= DOCROOT for deploy HTTP server. Default is /var/www
 	preseed_dir		::= Directory where preseed auto-generated files are stored. Default is /var/www/preseed
@@ -10,11 +10,12 @@
 	templates_dir	::= Directory where template files are stored. Default is /usr/share/pf-tools/templates
 	common_config	::= Filename for default hosts configuration. Default is update-common. this file is stored in
 						checkout_dir/COMMON directory
-	start_net_file	::= The parsing for configuration is initiated with this filename. Default is private-network
+# TODO
+#	start_net_file	::= The parsing for configuration is initiated with this filename. Default is private-network
 
 [features]
 	ipv4			::= IPV4 activation status 1 for enabled and 0 for disabled. Default is 1
-	ipv6'			::= IPV0 activation status 1 for enabled and 0 for disabled. Default is 0
+	ipv6			::= IPV6 activation status 1 for enabled and 0 for disabled. Default is 0
 	update			::= Permits the execution of update-config on host. 1 for enabled and 0 for disabled. Default is 1
 
 [vcs]
@@ -33,7 +34,7 @@
 	preseed				::= Preseed template filename for <mode> Default for debian is standard-preseed, and ubuntu is ubuntu-preseed
 	pxe					::=	PXE template filename. Default value for debian is standard-installer, and ubuntu-installer for ubuntu
 	sources_list		::= sources.list template filename. Default for debian is sources.list, and ubuntu-sources.list for ubuntu
-	default_sections	::= Default section for offcial packegs repositories Default for debian is 'main contrib non-free',
+	default_sections	::= Default section for official packages repositories Default for debian is 'main contrib non-free',
 							and 'main universe restricted' for ubuntu
 	custom-sections		::= Default section for custom packages. Default value is common for debian and ubuntu
 	grub				::= PATH to grub configuration file for overriding kernel options when booting from hard drive.
diff -r 0d83e985d181 -r e9a9a1e54c3f doc/updatefile-syntax
--- a/doc/updatefile-syntax	Mon Sep 15 11:43:39 2014 +0200
+++ b/doc/updatefile-syntax	Mon Sep 15 12:58:04 2014 +0200
@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 	According to usage of Config::IniFiles parser, if a section is declared at multiple times,
 	the parsing will contain only one section ... which cause configuration errors.
 
-SO BE CAREFULL WITH your definition into a single file.
+SO BE CAREFUL WITH your definition into a single file.
 
 
 SYNOPSYS : addfile or createfile
 	* addfile		: adding a file and updating it according to the source
 	* createfile	: creating a file from source or "touch" it if no source is defined. If the file
 					  already exist even if the file is not equal to the source the creation is done
-					  and existant datas are lost
+					  and existing data are lost
 [<file_path>]
 	! action		::= addfile|createfile
 	? depends		::= space separated list for handling section's depends



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