[Pkg-cli-apps-commits] [SCM] openbve branch, master, updated. debian/1.4.0.0-1-48-ga246a70

[Paul Sladen]

The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit a246a701a9c631057c42cd325186739fc031413c
Author: Paul Sladen <debian at paul.sladen.org>
Date:   Tue Jan 24 15:48:28 2012 +0100

    debian/copyright: tweak grammar further, name original "Boso View Express" inspiration

diff --git a/debian/copyright b/debian/copyright
index abb8e89..46d16c7 100644
--- a/debian/copyright
+++ b/debian/copyright
@@ -49,24 +49,25 @@ Comment:
  .
  It's notable that the intent and appreciation for sharing and
  openness has always present with upstream, as can be seen from the
- name "Open...".  Openbve was itself a reaction to "freeware", but
- non-distributable (and non-fixable) version of "BVE Train Simulator".
+ name "Open...".  Openbve was itself a reaction to "freeware" but
+ non-distributable, and non-fixable programm "BVE Trainsim"
+ (originally called "Boso View Express", 鉄道運転シミュレーション).
  .
  Although the intent has been constant, the PD wording has evolved,
  attempting to remain short.  Upstream have welcomed input where it
  as been offered on the licence-terminology; as can be seen in the
- discussion and the preference would be for copyright law to not
- exist (international treaties dictate otherwise for the moment).
+ discussion: the upstream preference would be for copyright law to
+ not exist (international treaties dictate otherwise for the moment).
  .
  History
  .
  In 2008, in preparation for Debian packaging, discussion was started
- with upstream for the upstream bugtracker/forum and is copied below
- for context.  (It was at the time the closest introduction to the
- licence and intent behind the Openbve project).
+ with upstream via the upstream bugtracker/forum, and is copied below
+ for context.  (At the time it was the best introduction to the
+ licence and original intent behind the Openbve project).
  .
- More information on the thinking behind the "license free" intend has been
- saved in this 'debian/copyright' file, the essence of which is: 
+ More information on the thinking behind the "licence-free" intend has been
+ saved here in this 'debian/copyright' file, the essence of which is: 
  .
    Post by michelle on Sat, 14th Feb 2009, 18:00, UTC
  .
@@ -177,7 +178,7 @@ Comment:
  .
  In Openbve=1.4.0.0 in-program managed content was introduced, Openbve
  has gone out of their way to ensure that anything to be included in
- the managed content repositary is explicitly distributable.  Although
+ the managed content repository is explicitly distributable.  Although
  this does affect Debian/Ubuntu directly, is shows an understanding
  of the problems that can be present without having explicit statements:
  .
@@ -208,7 +209,7 @@ Comment:
      This applies worldwide and is unlimited in duration.
      -----------------------------------------------------------------
  .
- This do not affect plugins packaged in Debian, but are what is
+ This does not affect plugins packaged /in/ Debian, but is what is
  necessary should a developer wish to make their content available
  from the new in-program managed content downloading system.
 

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