[Pkg-fedora-ds-maintainers] 389-ds-base: Changes to 'debian-unstable'

[Timo Aaltonen]

 debian/changelog |    4 ++-
 debian/control   |   71 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------
 2 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit c0e1a6c592f472b9f7da8e769957cc1f70a491d5
Author: Timo Aaltonen <tjaalton at ubuntu.com>
Date:   Tue Jul 3 17:50:02 2012 +0300

    update the descriptions

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index 5d7cd60..fbe7ec3 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -3,7 +3,9 @@
   * control: Stop hardcoding libs to binary depends. (Closes: #679790)
   * control: Add libnspr4-dev and libldap2-dev to 389-ds-base-dev
     Depends. (Closes: #679742)
-  * Drop the debconf template, and rewrap README.Debian. (Closes: #679870)
+  * l10n review (Closes: #679870) :
+    - Drop the debconf template, and rewrap README.Debian.
+    - control: Update the descriptions
 
  -- Timo Aaltonen <tjaalton at ubuntu.com>  Thu, 28 Jun 2012 17:39:09 +0300
 
diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 22666cc..ad2e459 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -38,10 +38,14 @@ Depends: ${misc:Depends},
  389-console,
  389-ds-console,
  389-dsgw,
-Description: 389 Directory Server Suite
- The 389 Directory Server, Administration Server, and Console Suite provide
- the LDAPv3 server, the httpd daemon used to administer the server, and the
- console GUI application used for server and user/group administration.
+Description: 389 Directory Server suite - metapackage
+ Based on the Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP), the 389
+ Directory Server is designed to manage large directories of users and
+ resources robustly and scalably.
+ .
+ This is a metapackage depending on the the LDAPv3 server, the HTTP
+ daemon used for server administration, and the graphical console used
+ for server and user/group administration.
 
 Package: 389-ds-base-libs
 Section: libs
@@ -50,11 +54,10 @@ Pre-Depends: ${misc:Pre-Depends}
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends},
 Breaks: libdirsrv0
 Replaces: libdirsrv0
-Description: 389 Directory Server libraries -- runtime
- The 389 Directory Server is a robust, scalable open-source server
- designed to manage large directories of users and resources. It is based
- on an open-systems server protocol called the Lightweight Directory
- Access Protocol (LDAP).
+Description: 389 Directory Server suite - libraries
+ Based on the Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP), the 389
+ Directory Server is designed to manage large directories of users and
+ resources robustly and scalably.
  .
  This package contains core libraries for the 389 Directory Server.
 
@@ -65,11 +68,10 @@ Architecture: any
 Pre-Depends: ${misc:Pre-Depends}
 Depends: ${misc:Depends},
  389-ds-base-libs (= ${binary:Version}),
-Description: 389 Directory Server libraries -- debugging symbols
- The 389 Directory Server is a robust, scalable open-source server
- designed to manage large directories of users and resources. It is based
- on an open-systems server protocol called the Lightweight Directory
- Access Protocol (LDAP).
+Description: 389 Directory Server suite - library debugging symbols
+ Based on the Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP), the 389
+ Directory Server is designed to manage large directories of users and
+ resources robustly and scalably.
  .
  This package provides detached debugging information for the 389
  Directory Server libraries. It is useful primarily to permit better 
@@ -85,11 +87,10 @@ Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends},
  libnspr4-dev,
 Breaks: libdirsrv-dev
 Replaces: libdirsrv-dev
-Description: 389 Directory Server libraries -- development files
- The 389 Directory Server is a robust, scalable open-source server
- designed to manage large directories of users and resources. It is based
- on an open-systems server protocol called the Lightweight Directory
- Access Protocol (LDAP).
+Description: 389 Directory Server suite - development files
+ Based on the Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP), the 389
+ Directory Server is designed to manage large directories of users and
+ resources robustly and scalably.
  .
  This package contains development headers for the core libraries
  of the 389 Directory Server, useful for developing plugins without
@@ -115,16 +116,21 @@ Replaces:
  dirsrv,
  libdirsrv0,
  libdirsrv-dev,
-Description: 389 Directory Server -- base package
- The 389 Directory Server is a robust, scalable open-source server
- designed to manage large directories of users and resources. It is based
- on an open-systems server protocol called the Lightweight Directory
- Access Protocol (LDAP).
+Description: 389 Directory Server suite - server
+ Based on the Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP), the 389
+ Directory Server is designed to manage large directories of users and
+ resources robustly and scalably.
  .
- Amongst other features, it supports 4-Way multi-master replication, 
- Active Directory user and group synchronization, great scalability and
- on-line, zero downtime, LDAP-based update of schema, configuration,
- management and in-tree Access Control Information (ACIs).
+ Its key features include:
+  * four-way multi-master replication;
+  * great scalability;
+  * extensive documentation;
+  * Active Directory user and group synchronization;
+  * secure authentication and transport;
+  * support for LDAPv3;
+  * graphical management console;
+  * on-line, zero downtime update of schema, configuration, and
+    in-tree Access Control Information.
 
 Package: 389-ds-base-dbg
 Section: debug
@@ -132,11 +138,10 @@ Priority: extra
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${misc:Depends},
  389-ds-base (= ${binary:Version}),
-Description: 389 Directory Server -- debugging symbols
- The 389 Directory Server is a robust, scalable open-source server
- designed to manage large directories of users and resources. It is based
- on an open-systems server protocol called the Lightweight Directory
- Access Protocol (LDAP).
+Description: 389 Directory Server suite - server debugging symbols
+ Based on the Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP), the 389
+ Directory Server is designed to manage large directories of users and
+ resources robustly and scalably.
  .
  This package provides detached debugging information for the 389
  Directory Server. It is useful primarily to permit better backtraces