[pkg-firebird-general] gsec.sgml facelift

Tamas TEVESZ ice at extreme.hu
Tue Mar 6 22:50:32 CET 2007



i'd still switch over to mdoc anytime, but hey.
started as fixing a typo, got spiced with some language, markup and 
style.

* >> docbook :)

Index: gsec.sgml
===================================================================
--- gsec.sgml	(revision 1018)
+++ gsec.sgml	(working copy)
@@ -60,10 +60,10 @@
     <title>DESCRIPTION</title>
 
     <para><command>&manpackage;</command> is a utility used in conjunction with
-    security database security.fdb, to specify user names and passwords for 
-	a Firebird server</para>
+        the security database security.fdb, to specify user names and passwords
+	used by a Firebird server</para>
 
-    <para> http://www.firebirdsql.org/ - Documentation -> Knowledgebase -> 
+    <para>http://www.firebirdsql.org/ - Documentation -> Knowledgebase -> 
 	User Documentation -> Interbase 6. Operation Guide (look for ibmgr).</para>
 
 
@@ -72,33 +72,34 @@
   <title>COMMON OPTIONS</title>
     <refsect2>
       <title>-di[splay]</title>
-      <para>Displays all rows of security.fdb</para>
+      <para>Display all rows from security.fdb</para>
     </refsect2>
 
-
     <refsect2>
       <title>-di[splay] <replaceable>name</replaceable></title>
-	  <para>Displays information only for user <replaceable>name</replaceable></para>
+	  <para>Display information only for user <replaceable>name</replaceable></para>
     </refsect2>
     
     <refsect2>
       <title>-a[dd] <replaceable>name</replaceable> -pw <replaceable>password</replaceable></title>
-	  <para></para>
+	  <para>Add a user named <replaceable>user</replaceable> with a password of
+          <replaceable>password</replaceable>.</para>
     </refsect2>
 
     <refsect2>
-      <title>-mo[dify] <replaceable>name</replaceable> [options]</title>
-	  <para>Like add, except that name allready exists in security.fdb</para>
+      <title>-mo[dify] <replaceable>name</replaceable> <replaceable>[options]</replaceable></title>
+	  <para>Modify the account <replaceable>name</replaceable>, optionally as
+          specified by <replaceable>options</replaceable>.</para>
     </refsect2>
 
     <refsect2>
-      <title>-de[lete] name</title>
-      <para>Delete user name from security.fdb</para>
+      <title>-de[lete] <replaceable>name</replaceable></title>
+      <para>Delete user <replaceable>name</replaceable> from security.fdb</para>
     </refsect2>
 
     <refsect2>
       <title>-h[elp] or ?</title>
-	<para>Displays gsec command and syntax</para>
+	<para>Displays gsec commands and syntax</para>
     </refsect2>
 
 </refsect1>

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