r5762 - in packages/trunk/bastet/debian: . manpages

[Barry deFreese]

Author: bddebian-guest
Date: 2008-02-14 19:12:17 +0000 (Thu, 14 Feb 2008)
New Revision: 5762

Modified:
   packages/trunk/bastet/debian/changelog
   packages/trunk/bastet/debian/manpages/bastet.6
Log:
  * Man page grammar and spelling clean-up. (Closes: #457823).
Remove redundant changelog lines about desktop file.


Modified: packages/trunk/bastet/debian/changelog
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/bastet/debian/changelog	2008-02-14 15:31:10 UTC (rev 5761)
+++ packages/trunk/bastet/debian/changelog	2008-02-14 19:12:17 UTC (rev 5762)
@@ -1,12 +1,10 @@
 bastet (0.41-6) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
 
-  [ Eddy Petrișor ]
-  * added missing encoding field in the desktop file
-
   [ Barry deFreese ]
   * Fix up desktop file (Encoding is deprecated now)
   * Add watch file
   * Add Homepage field in control section
+  * Man page grammar and spelling clean-up. (Closes: #457823).
 
   [ Ansgar Burchardt ]
   * Added Vcs-Svn and Vcs-Browser fields in the control file.

Modified: packages/trunk/bastet/debian/manpages/bastet.6
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/bastet/debian/manpages/bastet.6	2008-02-14 15:31:10 UTC (rev 5761)
+++ packages/trunk/bastet/debian/manpages/bastet.6	2008-02-14 19:12:17 UTC (rev 5762)
@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
 .TH BASTET 6 "MAY 2004"
 .SH NAME
-bastet \- GPL'd clon of tetris with a bastard level
+bastet \- GPL'd clone of tetris with a bastard level
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 .B bastet [WIDTHxHEIGHT]
 .SH DESCRIPTION
 .B bastet
 (stands for "bastard tetris") is a free (GPL'd) clone of Tetris(r)
 (built on the top of petris by Peter Seidler) which is designed to be
-"as bastard as possible": it tries to compute how useful blocks are and
+"as bastard as possible". It tries to compute how useful blocks are and
 gives you the worst, the most bastard it can find. Playing bastet can be
 a painful experience, especially if you usually make "canyons" and wait for
-the long I-shaped block.
+the long I-shaped blocks.
 .SH USAGE
-Use up and down arrow to select a level when bastet has been launched. The
-more level the merrier points you will get when playing. Use left and
-right arrow to move the piece from side to side. Use up arrow to rotate, 
+Use up and down arrows to select a level when bastet has been launched. The
+more levels, the more points you will get when playing. Use left and
+right arrows to move the piece from side to side. Use up arrow to rotate, 
 and down arrow to speed up the fall.
 
 Some other keybindings will be useful: p for pausing, q for quitting during 
@@ -27,6 +27,6 @@
 .RS
 The global high scores for bastet. 
 .SH BUGS
-Not known at the moment. If you find someone, report it.
+None known at the moment. If you find one, report it.
 .SH AUTHOR
 Federico Poloni <fph at ngi.it>