r5342 - packages/trunk/gamine/debian

[Cyril Brulebois]

Author: kibi-guest
Date: 2008-01-14 15:24:46 +0000 (Mon, 14 Jan 2008)
New Revision: 5342

Modified:
   packages/trunk/gamine/debian/changelog
   packages/trunk/gamine/debian/control
Log:
Improve long descriptions, thanks to David Ammouial (Closes: #457726). Fix a typo in Sam's last name.

Modified: packages/trunk/gamine/debian/changelog
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/gamine/debian/changelog	2008-01-14 14:14:34 UTC (rev 5341)
+++ packages/trunk/gamine/debian/changelog	2008-01-14 15:24:46 UTC (rev 5342)
@@ -1,9 +1,14 @@
 gamine (0.0.1-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
 
-  * fix the copyright file since Sam Hocvar name had been removed from it by
+  [ Goneri Le Bouder ]
+  * Fix the copyright file since Sam Hocevar name had been removed from it by
     the author in the initial tarball.
-  * use the upstream icon instead of mine.
+  * Use the upstream icon instead of mine.
 
+  [ Cyril Brulebois ]
+  * Improve long descriptions, thanks to David Ammouial for the suggestions
+    (Closes: #457726).
+
  -- Goneri Le Bouder <goneri at rulezlan.org>  Fri, 30 Nov 2007 20:27:38 +0100
 
 gamine (0.0.1-2) unstable; urgency=low

Modified: packages/trunk/gamine/debian/control
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/gamine/debian/control	2008-01-14 14:14:34 UTC (rev 5341)
+++ packages/trunk/gamine/debian/control	2008-01-14 15:24:46 UTC (rev 5342)
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@
  Gamine is a game designed for 2 years old children who are not able to use
  a keyboard.
  .
- The child uses his mouse to draw colored dot and line on the screen.
+ The child uses the mouse to draw coloured dots and lines on the screen.
 
 Package: gamine-data
 Architecture: all
 Suggests: gamine
 Description: data files for gamine game
- gamine is a game for young children 
+ gamine is a game for young children.
  .
  This package contains sound and level data for the game.
  .
- You need the gamine package to use these data files
+ You need the gamine package to use these data files.