r9531 - packages/trunk/excellent-bifurcation/debian

[Barry deFreese]

Author: bdefreese
Date: 2009-04-11 17:55:01 +0000 (Sat, 11 Apr 2009)
New Revision: 9531

Modified:
   packages/trunk/excellent-bifurcation/debian/control
Log:
Fix a typo and some grammar in the long description.


Modified: packages/trunk/excellent-bifurcation/debian/control
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/excellent-bifurcation/debian/control	2009-04-11 17:30:05 UTC (rev 9530)
+++ packages/trunk/excellent-bifurcation/debian/control	2009-04-11 17:55:01 UTC (rev 9531)
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
  available to play on. Its graphics try to mimic the colours, sounds and
  feeling of the 8-bit games.
  .
- In the game, you drive two ships at the same tme, each on every side of the
- screen. The game play is very unique and very fun. It might be quite a brain
+ In the game, you drive two ships at the same time, on two sides of the
+ screen. The game play is very unique and fun. It might be quite a brain
  bender anyway.
  .
  Excellent Bifurcation was Linley Henzel's entry in the AutoFire 2007 Shooter