r10289 - packages/trunk/cookietool/debian

[Peter Pentchev]

Author: roam-guest
Date: 2009-09-06 23:01:57 +0000 (Sun, 06 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 10289

Modified:
   packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/changelog
   packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/control
Log:
Fix a couple of grammatical errors in the long package description, too.
Reword the short description to be a noun phrase and avoid "you" and
"yours".


Modified: packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/changelog
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/changelog	2009-09-06 22:56:43 UTC (rev 10288)
+++ packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/changelog	2009-09-06 23:01:57 UTC (rev 10289)
@@ -11,9 +11,11 @@
     breaking out the repeated GPL-2+ license text into a separate section.
   * Only enable the hardening wrapper if "hardening" is specified in
     DEB_BUILD_OPTIONS.
-  * Fix a couple of minor grammatical errors in README.Debian and a typo
-    in the rules file.
+  * Fix a couple of minor grammatical errors and typos in the control,
+    rules, and README.Debian files.
   * Convert the patch headers to the DEP 3 format.
+  * Reword the short description to make it a noun phrase and avoid
+    the second person singular.
 
  -- Peter Pentchev <roam at ringlet.net>  Mon, 17 Aug 2009 18:10:41 +0300
 

Modified: packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/control
===================================================================
--- packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/control	2009-09-06 22:56:43 UTC (rev 10288)
+++ packages/trunk/cookietool/debian/control	2009-09-06 23:01:57 UTC (rev 10289)
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
 Package: cookietool
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: A team of programs to help you maintain your fortune database
+Description: suite of programs to help maintain a fortune database
  The ''cookietool'' itself eliminates duplicate entries, sorts cookies
- alphabetically or by size if you wish. The ''cdbsplit'' extracts parts
+ alphabetically or by size if you wish. The ''cdbsplit'' tool extracts parts
  of the database to a separate file, by keyword, by size, by number, or
  as groups of 'similar' cookies.