[openjk] 06/15: control: improve wording

[Simon McVittie]

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commit da9d77de601381a0e08bc9131921f5c356d670a7
Author: Simon McVittie <smcv at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Dec 30 18:43:32 2014 +0000

    control: improve wording
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 debian/control | 34 +++++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 6938b41..adb4bd1 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -27,12 +27,13 @@ Depends:
 Description: Jedi Academy single-player and multiplayer game engine
  Star Wars Jedi Knight: Jedi Academy is a first- and third-person
  action game set in the Star Wars universe, developed by Raven Software
- and released in 2003.
+ and first released in 2003.
  .
- This package contains the OpenJK single-player and multiplayer game engines
- for Jedi Academy, based on the 2013 GPL source release and modified to work
- on modern systems. It requires non-distributable game data files
- prepared using the game-data-packager tool.
+ This package contains the openjk_sp and openjk, the OpenJK single-player
+ and multiplayer game engines for Jedi Academy, based on the 2013 GPL
+ source release and modified to work on modern systems.
+ It requires non-distributable game data files in the
+ jedi-academy-data package, prepared using the game-data-packager tool.
  .
  Jedi Academy is a sequel to Star Wars Jedi Knight II: Jedi Outcast, for
  which an experimental engine is available in the openjk-outcast package.
@@ -47,12 +48,15 @@ Depends:
 Description: Jedi Academy multiplayer game server
  Star Wars Jedi Knight: Jedi Academy is a first- and third-person
  action game set in the Star Wars universe, developed by Raven Software
- and released in 2003.
+ and first released in 2003.
  .
- This package contains the OpenJK multiplayer dedicated server
+ This package contains openjkded, the OpenJK multiplayer dedicated server
  for Jedi Academy, based on the 2013 GPL source release and modified to work
- on modern systems. It requires non-distributable game data files
- prepared using the game-data-packager tool.
+ on modern systems. It also contains init scripts to run the server
+ automatically; on systemd systems, multiple instances are supported.
+ .
+ OpenJK requires non-distributable game data files in the jedi-academy-data
+ package, prepared using the game-data-packager tool.
 
 Package: openjk-outcast
 Architecture: i386 amd64
@@ -64,12 +68,12 @@ Depends:
 Description: experimental Jedi Outcast single-player game engine
  Star Wars Jedi Knight II: Jedi Outcast is a first- and third-person
  action game set in the Star Wars universe, developed by Raven Software
- and released in 2002.
+ and first released in 2002.
  .
- This package contains the OpenJK single-player game engine for Jedi Outcast,
- based on the 2013 GPL source release and modified to work
- on modern systems. It requires non-distributable game data files
- prepared using the game-data-packager tool.
+ This package contains openjo_sp, the OpenJK single-player game engine for
+ Jedi Outcast, based on the 2013 GPL source release and modified to work
+ on modern systems. It requires non-distributable game data files in the
+ jedi-outcast-data package, prepared using the game-data-packager tool.
  .
  This version of the OpenJK engine is a mixture of code originating from
  Jedi Outcast and its sequel Jedi Academy; it is not currently considered to
@@ -83,7 +87,7 @@ Depends:
  ${misc:Depends},
  ${shlibs:Depends},
 Description: common files for all OpenJK games
- This package contains common files for the openjk-academy,
+ This package contains files shared by the openjk-academy,
  openjk-outcast and openjk-academy-server packages.
 
 Package: openjk-dbg

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