[redeclipse] 18/23: Update package descriptions to match readme

Martin Werner arand-guest at moszumanska.debian.org
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commit 37a02f9d46245f8ca445e309ed115b85bb8c7870
Author: Martin Erik Werner <martinerikwerner at gmail.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 3 18:45:36 2015 +0200

    Update package descriptions to match readme
    
    Try to match descriptions as close to the readme file as possible,
    toning down some advertising, and adding a "cross-platform multiplayer"
    point.
---
 debian/control | 22 +++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 100c649..a4562a4 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -21,18 +21,14 @@ Architecture: any
 Depends: redeclipse-data (>= ${source:Upstream-Version}),
          ${misc:Depends},
          ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: multiplayer FPS game based on Cube2
- A single-player and multi-player first-person ego-shooter, built on Cube
- Engine 2, which lends itself toward a balanced gameplay, completely at the
- control of map makers, while maintaining a general theme of agility in a
- variety of environments.
+Description: free, casual arena shooter
+ A fun-filled, casual, first person arena shooter, built as a total conversion
+ of Cube Engine 2, which lends itself toward a balanced gameplay, with a
+ general theme of agility in a variety of environments.
  .
- Features:
-  * Balanced gameplay, with a general theme of agility in a variety of
-    environments
-  * Parkour, impulse boosts, dashing, sliding, and other tricks
-  * Favourite gamemodes with tons of mutators and variables
-  * Available for Windows, Linux/BSD and Mac OSX
+  * Cross-platform multiplayer
+  * Features parkour, impulse boosts, dashing, and other tricks
+  * Favourite gamemodes with an array of mutators and variables
   * Builtin editor lets you create your own maps cooperatively online
 
 Package: redeclipse-dbg
@@ -68,5 +64,5 @@ Priority: extra
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Description: common config files for the Red Eclipse FPS game
- This package contains the common version.cfg file for the server and client of
- the Red Eclipse FPS game.
+ This package contains the common config files for the server and client of the
+ Red Eclipse FPS game.

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