[game-data-packager] 01/02: improve spelling, punctuation, grammar

[Simon McVittie]

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commit 9539574e1cae1a2b48e485b63e02a72e8a3449cf
Author: Simon McVittie <smcv at debian.org>
Date:   Thu Jun 25 10:34:11 2015 +0100

    improve spelling, punctuation, grammar
---
 data/atlantis.yaml | 10 +++++-----
 data/compet_n.yaml |  7 +++----
 data/zork.yaml     |  2 +-
 debian/changelog   | 16 ++++++++--------
 debian/control     |  6 +++---
 5 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/data/atlantis.yaml b/data/atlantis.yaml
index 8f8545d..2bc7e67 100644
--- a/data/atlantis.yaml
+++ b/data/atlantis.yaml
@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@ copyright: © 1992 LucasArts
 plugin: scummvm_common
 
 help_text: |
-  The non-english versions avaible on GOG.com are not allways the best ones.
+  The non-english versions available on GOG.com are not always the best ones.
   For exemple, the German & Spanish packages are the
-  floppy disk versions that lacks dubbing.
+  floppy disk versions that lack dubbing.
 
   If you have a .sog / .so3 file whose checksums
-  doesn't match; it should likely still work when
-  copied manually in /usr/share/games/atlantis-<lang>
+  don't match; it should likely still work when
+  copied manually into /usr/share/games/atlantis-<lang>
 
   - monster.sou: original voices
-  - monster.so3: converted with Mp3 codec
+  - monster.so3: converted with MP3 codec
   - monster.sog: converted with Ogg codec
 
 packages:
diff --git a/data/compet_n.yaml b/data/compet_n.yaml
index 0d7a6cd..c8045cd 100644
--- a/data/compet_n.yaml
+++ b/data/compet_n.yaml
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ copyright: © 1995-2002 Various
 plugin: doom_common
 
 help_text: |
-  This is a selection of high-quality loose PWADS made
-  by various individuals and choosen back then with
-  an online poll on Compet-N website that holded
-  speedrunning contests.
+  This is a selection of high-quality Doom and Doom II PWADS made
+  by various individuals and choosen by an online poll on the
+  Compet-N speedrunning contest website.
 
   Old website:
     http://www.doom2.net/compet-n/index.cgi?action=pwads
diff --git a/data/zork.yaml b/data/zork.yaml
index 80a8496..4a5e953 100644
--- a/data/zork.yaml
+++ b/data/zork.yaml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ longname: "Zork Anthology"
 plugin: z_code
 
 help_text:
-  Zork I,II & III are freely downloadable.
+  Zork I, II & III are freely downloadable.
 
   The "Zork Anthology" also includes "Beyond Zork"
   and adds "Planetfall" as a bonus.
diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index 1d4b3cb..c50fc31 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
 game-data-packager (42) UNRELEASED; urgency=medium
 
   [ Alexandre Detiste ]
-  * add support for Space Quest 1,2,3,4 & 5
-  * replace non-ascii characters to closest ascii character
+  * add support for Space Quest 1, 2, 3, 4 & 5
+  * replace non-ASCII characters with closest ASCII character
     when displaying help screen with LANG=C (Closes: #784330)
-  * add support for King's Quest 1,2,3,4,5 & 6
+  * add support for King's Quest 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 & 6
   * Heroes 3: don't package HiScore.dat (Closes: #784995)
   * add support for Waxworks
   * add support for Simon the Sorcerer 1 & 2
   * add support for Gobliiins (full game & demo)
-  * add support for Leisure Suit Larry 1,2,3,5&6
+  * add support for Leisure Suit Larry 1, 2, 3, 5 & 6
   * add support for Compet-N PWAD's (Closes: #776061)
   * only load actually needed YAML files (Closes: #779937)
   * improve 'GDP $game --help' (Closes: #784563)
@@ -19,15 +19,15 @@ game-data-packager (42) UNRELEASED; urgency=medium
   * add support for Zak McKracken and the Alien Mindbenders
   * add support for TeenAgent (Closes: #783921)
   * add support for Dračí Historie GPL'ed game (Closes: #783914)
-  * add support for Quest for Glory 1,2 & 3
+  * add support for Quest for Glory 1, 2 & 3
   * add support for Indiana Jones and the Fate of Atlantis
     (en/de/fr/es/it languages, most CD & floppy versions)
   * add support for The Dig
   * add support for Sam & Max Hit the Road
   * add support fot Inherit the Earth
-  * add support for Police Quest 2,3
-  * add support for Legend of Kyrandia 1,2&3
-  * add support for Elvira 1&2
+  * add support for Police Quest 2, 3
+  * add support for Legend of Kyrandia 1, 2 & 3
+  * add support for Elvira 1 & 2
   * add support for Dune 2
 
   [ Fabian Greffrath ]
diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index ede8ff6..3ae35c0 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -97,12 +97,12 @@ Description: Installer for game data files
   * Heroes of Might & Magic III
   * King's Quest I, II, III, IV, V & VI
   * Legend of Kyrandiar I, II & III
-  * Leisure Suit Larry 1,2,3,5 & 6
+  * Leisure Suit Larry 1, 2, 3, 5 & 6
   * LGeneral (Panzer General)
   * Maniac Mansion & Day of the Tentacle
-  * Police Quest I,II & III
+  * Police Quest I, II & III
   * Quake, Quake II and Quake III Arena
-  * Quest For Glory I,II & III
+  * Quest For Glory I, II & III
   * Rise of the Triad
   * Sam & Max Hit the Road
   * Sfinx

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