[Pkg-games-ubuntu] [Bug 657943] Re: grammatical errors in package description

[Book 'em Dano]

** Changed in: gtkatlantic (Ubuntu)
   Importance: Undecided => Low

** Changed in: gtkatlantic (Ubuntu)
       Status: New => Triaged

** Tags added: bitesize

** Description changed:

  Binary package hint: gtkatlantic
  
  "GtkAtlantic is a game, like monopoly. This is a network client which
  work with the monopd server"
  
- Monopoly needs to be capitalized and a trademark symbol next to it. Also
- "which work" should be changed to "that works"
+ Monopoly needs to be capitalized and a trademark symbol placed next to
+ it. Also "which work" should be changed to "that works"
  
- ProblemType: Bug
- DistroRelease: Ubuntu 10.10
+ ProblemType: BugDistroRelease: Ubuntu 10.10
  Package: gtkatlantic (not installed)
  ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.35-22.33-generic 2.6.35.4
  Uname: Linux 2.6.35-22-generic i686
  Architecture: i386
- Date: Sun Oct 10 16:34:31 2010
- InstallationMedia: Xubuntu 10.10 "Maverick Meerkat" - Alpha i386 (20100831.1)
+ Date: Sun Oct 10 16:34:31 2010InstallationMedia: Xubuntu 10.10 "Maverick Meerkat" - Alpha i386 (20100831.1)
  ProcEnviron:
-  LANG=en_US.utf8
-  SHELL=/bin/bash
- SourcePackage: gtkatlantic
+  LANG=en_US.utf8
+  SHELL=/bin/bashSourcePackage: gtkatlantic

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grammatical errors in package description
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/657943
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Status in “gtkatlantic” package in Ubuntu: Triaged

Bug description:
Binary package hint: gtkatlantic

"GtkAtlantic is a game, like monopoly. This is a network client which work with the monopd server"

Monopoly needs to be capitalized and a trademark symbol placed next to it. Also "which work" should be changed to "that works"

ProblemType: BugDistroRelease: Ubuntu 10.10
Package: gtkatlantic (not installed)
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.35-22.33-generic 2.6.35.4
Uname: Linux 2.6.35-22-generic i686
Architecture: i386
Date: Sun Oct 10 16:34:31 2010InstallationMedia: Xubuntu 10.10 "Maverick Meerkat" - Alpha i386 (20100831.1)
ProcEnviron:
 LANG=en_US.utf8
 SHELL=/bin/bashSourcePackage: gtkatlantic