[Pkg-games-ubuntu] [Bug 834098] [NEW] Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file

[Paul Stewart]

Public bug reported:

1. Open the Ubuntu Software Center
2. Search for "Battle Tanks"
3. Click on the "More Info" button

The second sentence is "has original....."
I think the sentence needs to be reworded to something like:

"It has original cartoon-like graphics and cool music, is fun and
dynamic, and has death-match and cooperative network modes."

Thanks
Paul

ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
Package: btanks (not installed)
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-11.48-generic 2.6.38.8
Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64
Architecture: amd64
Date: Thu Aug 25 13:02:07 2011
InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
ProcEnviron:
 LANGUAGE=en_US:en
 LANG=en_US.UTF-8
 SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: btanks
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

** Affects: btanks (Ubuntu)
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New


** Tags: amd64 apport-bug natty

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Title:
  Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file

Status in “btanks” package in Ubuntu:
  New

Bug description:
  1. Open the Ubuntu Software Center
  2. Search for "Battle Tanks"
  3. Click on the "More Info" button

  The second sentence is "has original....."
  I think the sentence needs to be reworded to something like:

  "It has original cartoon-like graphics and cool music, is fun and
  dynamic, and has death-match and cooperative network modes."

  Thanks
  Paul

  ProblemType: Bug
  DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
  Package: btanks (not installed)
  ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-11.48-generic 2.6.38.8
  Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64
  Architecture: amd64
  Date: Thu Aug 25 13:02:07 2011
  InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
  ProcEnviron:
   LANGUAGE=en_US:en
   LANG=en_US.UTF-8
   SHELL=/bin/bash
  SourcePackage: btanks
  UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

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