[Pkg-games-ubuntu] [Bug 834369] Re: Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file
Paul Stewart
paulbrianstewart at gmail.com
Fri Aug 26 03:56:56 UTC 2011
** Patch added: "Control file patch"
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/834369/+attachment/2316304/+files/control
** Branch linked: lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/alien-arena/834369
-Spelling-Grammar-Errors-Fix
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Title:
Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file
Status in “alien-arena” package in Ubuntu:
New
Bug description:
1. Open the Ubuntu Software Center
2. Search for Alien Arena
3. Click the 'More Info' button
There are some spelling and grammar errors in the description:
deathmatch = death-match
32 bit = 32-bit
hi resolution = hi-resolution
hi poly = hi-poly
For the description I think it might be better to add some commas to break up the long sentences.
I suggest:
"ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online death-match shooter
crafted from the original source code of Quake II and Quake III, released
by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32-bit
graphics, a new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
hi-resolution textures and skins, and hi-poly models and stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
pushes the envelope of graphical beauty rivalling today's top games."
I will add a patch to this report and push my suggestions up to launchpad.
Thanks
Paul
ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
Package: alien-arena (not installed)
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-11.48-generic 2.6.38.8
Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64
Architecture: amd64
Date: Thu Aug 25 20:42:21 2011
InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
ProcEnviron:
LANGUAGE=en_US:en
LANG=en_US.UTF-8
SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: alien-arena
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)
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