[Pkg-games-ubuntu] [Bug 858631] Re: Spelling Error in Control File Description

[Chris Wilson]

** Also affects: hundredpapercuts
   Importance: Undecided
       Status: New

** Changed in: hundredpapercuts
    Milestone: None => precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions

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Title:
  Spelling Error in Control File Description

Status in One Hundred Paper Cuts:
  New
Status in “sauerbraten” package in Ubuntu:
  New

Bug description:
  Open the software-center and search sauerbraten 
  Click on the 'More Info' button

  There needs to be some commas in the first sentence. For example, "Sauerbraten is a networked, fast-paced, 3D, first-person shooter game."
  Also, in my opinion, the word 'rather' is not needed in the second sentence. 
  In the second sentence the letter 'a' should not be before the word 'some'.

  ProblemType: Bug
  DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.10
  Package: sauerbraten 0.0.20100728.dfsg+repack-3
  ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 3.0.0-11.18-generic 3.0.4
  Uname: Linux 3.0.0-11-generic i686
  ApportVersion: 1.23-0ubuntu1
  Architecture: i386
  Date: Sat Sep 24 20:56:27 2011
  ProcEnviron:
   PATH=(custom, no user)
   LANG=en_US.UTF-8
   SHELL=/bin/bash
  SourcePackage: sauerbraten
  UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

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