[Pkg-games-ubuntu] [Bug 834369] Re: Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file

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Title:
  Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file

Status in “alien-arena” package in Ubuntu:
  Triaged

Bug description:
  1. Open the Ubuntu Software Center
  2. Search for Alien Arena
  3. Click the 'More Info' button

  There are some spelling and grammar errors in the description:
  deathmatch = death-match
  32 bit = 32-bit
  hi resolution = hi-resolution
  hi poly = hi-poly

  
  For the description I think it might be better to add some commas to break up the long sentences.
  I suggest:

  "ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online death-match shooter
   crafted from the original source code of Quake II and Quake III, released
   by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32-bit
   graphics, a new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
   hi-resolution textures and skins, and hi-poly models and stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
   pushes the envelope of graphical beauty rivalling today's top games."

  I will add a patch to this report and push my suggestions up to launchpad. 
  Thanks
  Paul

  ProblemType: Bug
  DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
  Package: alien-arena (not installed)
  ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-11.48-generic 2.6.38.8
  Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64
  Architecture: amd64
  Date: Thu Aug 25 20:42:21 2011
  InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
  ProcEnviron:
   LANGUAGE=en_US:en
   LANG=en_US.UTF-8
   SHELL=/bin/bash
  SourcePackage: alien-arena
  UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

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