[Pkg-grid-commits] nws/debian nws.templates,1.1,1.2

[Martin Quinson]

Update of /cvsroot/pkg-grid/nws/debian
In directory haydn:/tmp/cvs-serv662

Modified Files:
	nws.templates 
Log Message:
don't maintain this as a patch anymore. Graziano don't seem to be willing integrating this, and it's a pain to modify

Index: nws.templates
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RCS file: /cvsroot/pkg-grid/nws/debian/nws.templates,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- nws.templates	29 Jun 2004 21:59:34 -0000	1.1
+++ nws.templates	8 Aug 2005 21:02:01 -0000	1.2
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Configure NWS using debconf?
- There is several way to configure the NWS within Debian.
+ There are several way to configure the NWS within Debian.
  .
  The first one is to use debconf, and let the scripts generate a NWS
  configuration file. You can also choose to copy and adapt the file located
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Run a NWS nameserver on this host?
- In orfer to run, the Network Weather Service must contain one (and only
+ In order to run, the Network Weather Service must contain one (and only
  one) nameserver.
  .
  If you choose not to run the nameserver on this machine, you will be
@@ -42,22 +42,22 @@
 _Description: Nameserver location:
  Please give the location of the nameserver to use. Simply giving the name
  of the host on which this server runs is enough. You can use the IP adress
- instead of its name. If the server listen does not listen on the regular
+ instead of its name. If the server does not listen on the regular
  port (8090), specify it after a colon.
  .
- Some example of valid values are: "bluehost", "192.168.0.1",
- "fender.ucsb,edu", "bluehost:890".
+ For example, some valid values are: "bluehost", "192.168.0.1",
+ "fender.ucsb.edu" or "bluehost:890".
 
 Template: nws/memory
 Type: string
 _Description: Memory location:
  Please give the location of the memory server to use. Simply giving the name
  of the host on which this server runs is enough. You can use the IP adress
- instead of its name. If the server listen does not listen on the regular
+ instead of its name. If the server does not listen on the regular
  port (8060), specify it after a colon.
  .
- Some example of valid values are: "bluehost", "192.168.0.1",
- "fender.ucsb,edu", "bluehost:860".
+ For example, some valid values are: "bluehost", "192.168.0.1",
+ "fender.ucsb.edu" or "bluehost:890".
 
 Template: nws/skills
 Type: multiselect
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
  .
  memory: the amount of free memory available on the machine.
  .
- tcpConnect: the time requiered to establish a TCP connection.
+ tcpConnect: the time required to establish a TCP connection.
  .
  tcpMessage: TCP bandwidth and latency. Only the clique leader needs to
  specify this, the other members should not select this.
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 
 Template: nws/tcpMessage/members
 Type: string
-_Description: Which machines should participate to this tcpMessage experiment ?
+_Description: Which machines should participate in this tcpMessage experiment ?
  Please give the list (space or comma separated) of all machines between 
  which you want to monitor the tcp communication capacities.
  .