[Pkg-iscsi-maintainers] Bug#797860: open-iscsi: General update after the debconf review process

Christian PERRIER bubulle at debian.org
Sun Oct 18 05:07:08 UTC 2015 

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Monday, September 07, 2015, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a review
action on debconf templates for open-iscsi.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Monday, September 07, 2015. If your package was updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- open-iscsi.old/debian/open-iscsi.templates	2015-09-03 07:12:44.672751389 +0200
+++ open-iscsi/debian/open-iscsi.templates	2015-09-26 08:33:28.888043898 +0200
@@ -1,31 +1,44 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: open-iscsi/remove_even_with_active_sessions
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you want to proceed with removing open-iscsi?
+#flag:translate!:6,8
+_Description: Proceed with removing open-iscsi?
  There are currently active iSCSI sessions. If you remove open-iscsi
- now this may lead to data loss and/or hang your system at shutdown.
+ now this may lead to data loss and/or hang the system at shutdown.
  .
- DO NOT DO THIS IF YOUR ROOT FILESYSTEM IS ON ISCSI!
+ Do not do this if this system's root filesystem is on iSCSI.
  .
  If you do proceed, open-iscsi will try to unmount all filesystems on
- iSCSI and logout from current sessions. If that fails (because a
- filesystem is still in use), the kernel will keep open the current
- iSCSI sessions, but not perform any recovery in case there is an
- interruption of the network connection (or the target is rebooted
- etc.).
+ iSCSI and log out from current sessions. If that fails (because a
+ filesystem is still in use), the kernel will keep the current
+ iSCSI sessions open, but will not perform any recovery if there is an
+ interruption of the network connection (or if the target is rebooted).
+ .
+ If you really intend to remove open-iscsi, you should abort here and
+ then stop open-iscsi:
  .
- If you really want to remove open-iscsi, it is advisable to abort here
- and to first stop open-iscsi:
    service open-iscsi stop
+ .
  If that did not clean up everything, manually umount all filesystems
- that are on iSCSI, manually dismantle the storage stack and only then
- logout from all iSCSI sessions:
+ that are on iSCSI, manually dismantle the storage stack, and only then
+ log out from all iSCSI sessions:
+ .
    iscsiadm -m node --logoutall=all
+ .
  At that point, it should be safe to remove this package.
 
 Template: open-iscsi/upgrade_even_with_failed_sessions
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you want to proceed with upgrading open-iscsi?
- There are currently failed iSCSI sessions. Upgrading open-iscsi MAY
+_Description: Proceed with upgrading open-iscsi?
+ There are currently failed iSCSI sessions. Upgrading open-iscsi may
  cause data loss.
  .
  If you do not proceed, the preinstallation script will be aborted and
@@ -37,22 +50,22 @@
  recovery will be attempted once more.
 
 Template: open-iscsi/upgrade_recovery_error
-Type: note
+Type: error
 _Description: iSCSI recovery error on upgrade
- iscsid was restarted, but couldn't recover all iSCSI sessions. This is
- bad and could lead to DATA LOSS. Please check your system and kernel
+ The iscsid daemon was restarted, but couldn't recover all iSCSI sessions.
+ This is bad and could lead to data loss. Please check the system and kernel
  logs to determine the cause of the issue.
  .
- Please DO NOT acknowledge this note until you have fixed the problem
+ Please do not acknowledge this note until you have fixed the problem
  from a separate login shell.
 
 Template: open-iscsi/downgrade_and_break_system
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you really want to downgrade open-iscsi?
+_Description: Proceed with downgrading open-iscsi?
  You are trying to downgrade open-iscsi. Because of changes between the
  version you are downgrading to and the version currently installed,
- this downgrade WILL BREAK YOUR SYSTEM.
+ this downgrade will break the system.
  .
- If you really want to downgrade, please follow the following procedure
+ If you really intend to downgrade, please follow the following procedure
  instead: umount all iSCSI file systems, log out of all iSCSI sessions,
- back up /etc/iscsi, purge open-iscsi and reinstall the older version.
+ back up /etc/iscsi, purge open-iscsi, and reinstall the older version.
--- open-iscsi.old/debian/control	2015-09-03 07:12:44.672751389 +0200
+++ open-iscsi/debian/control	2015-09-11 18:14:39.868822690 +0200
@@ -13,21 +13,23 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, udev
 Pre-Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0
-Description: High performance, transport independent iSCSI implementation
+Description: iSCSI initiator tools
  Open-iSCSI is a high-performance, transport independent, multi-platform
- implementation of RFC3720 iSCSI
+ implementation of the RFC3720 Internet Small Computer Systems Interface
+ (iSCSI).
  .
- Open-iSCSI is partitioned into user and kernel parts where the kernel
- portion implements iSCSI data path (i.e. iSCSI Read and iSCSI Write)
- The userspace contains the entire control plane consisting of:
-  * Configuration Manager
-  * iSCSI Discovery, Login and Logout processing
-  * Connection level error processing
-  * Nop-In and Nop-Out handling
-  * Text processing, iSNS, SLP, Radius et cetera (future)
+ Open-iSCSI is partitioned into user and kernel parts, where the kernel
+ portion implements the iSCSI data path (i.e. iSCSI Read and iSCSI Write).
+ The userspace contains the entire control plane:
+  * Configuration Manager;
+  * iSCSI Discovery;
+  * Login and Logout processing;
+  * Connection level error processing;
+  * Nop-In and Nop-Out handling;
+  * (in the future) Text processing, iSNS, SLP, Radius, etc.
  .
- The userspace component consists of a daemon, iscsid and a management
- utility, iscsiadm
+ This package includes a daemon, iscsid, and a management utility,
+ iscsiadm.
 
 Package: open-iscsi-udeb
 # Note: the (virtual) udeb package scsi-modules (provided by different
@@ -40,7 +42,8 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, scsi-modules, libnss-files-udeb
 Description: Configure iSCSI
  Open-iSCSI is a high-performance, transport independent, multi-platform
- implementation of RFC3720 iSCSI.
+ implementation of the RFC3720 Internet Small Computer Systems Interface
+ (iSCSI).
  .
  This is the minimal package (udeb) used by debian-installer.
 
@@ -50,4 +53,3 @@
 #Description: Source Code for the Linux iSCSI Kernel Modules
 # Along with make-kpkg, this package maybe used to build a linux-iscsi-modules 
 # package for a kernel-image package.
-
--- open-iscsi.old/debian/changelog	2015-09-03 07:12:44.672751389 +0200
+++ open-iscsi/debian/changelog	2015-10-16 06:51:35.080217507 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+open-iscsi (2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500-12) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #797860
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #801127
+  * French (Julien Patriarca).  Closes: #801181
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #801625
+  * Spanish; (Camale?n).  Closes: #801686
+  * Dutch; (Frans Spiesschaert).  Closes: #801706
+  * Portuguese (Am?rico Monteiro).  Closes: #801731
+  * Italian (Beatrice Torracca).  Closes: #801875
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #801888
+  * German (Chris Leick).  Closes: #801903
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <cperrier at mykerinos.kheops.frmug.org>  Thu, 03 Sep 2015 07:27:43 +0200
+
 open-iscsi (2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500-11) unstable; urgency=low
 
   [ Christian Seiler ]
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