[Pkg-iscsi-maintainers] Bug#877949: Package description: do you really mean "offload"?
Martin Eberhard Schauer
Martin.E.Schauer at gmx.de
Sat Oct 7 20:56:47 UTC 2017
X-Debbugs-CC: debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org
the last paragraph of the package description  and its short
description sound strange to me.
"This package is required to offload iSCSI onto these devices."
Not being a native English speaker, I found . Thus I believe that
"offload" and "onto" don't fit together. And I'm wondering what would
be a better wording.
"You need this package|software to make these devices work with iSCSI"?
Hopyfully some native speaker has a better suggestion for this sentence
and the short description.
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