Bug#586918: lvm2: vgimportclone(8) manpage example could be clarified

[Christoph Anton Mitterer]

Package: lvm2
Version: 2.02.66-2
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Hi.

The example of the vgimportclone(8) manpage could be clarified a bit,
especially which PVs are origin, and which are snapshots, which is
not "definitely" clear in the first sentence.

Attached would be a patch to do this. Please also forward to upstream :)


Cheers,
Chris.
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--- vgimportclone.8	2010-06-23 15:16:32.825393000 +0200
+++ vgimportclone.8	2010-06-23 15:19:11.281107452 +0200
@@ -33,13 +33,13 @@
 The LVM2 binary to use.
 Defaults to "lvm".
 .SH EXAMPLES
-If origin VG
+The origin VG
 .B test_vg 
 has PVs 
 .BR /dev/loop0 " and " /dev/loop1
-and 
+and the respective snapshot PVs of the origin PVs are  
 .BR /dev/loop2 " and " /dev/loop3
-are respective snapshot PVs of the origin PVs.
+.
 To rename the VG
 associated with
 .BR /dev/loop2 " and " /dev/loop3
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 .B test_vg
 to
 .B test_vg_snap
-(and change associated VG and PV UUIDs):
+(and to change associated VG and PV UUIDs) do:
 .nf
 
 \	vgimportclone --basevgname test_vg_snap /dev/loop2 /dev/loop3