[LCFC] templates://mdadm/{mdadm.templates}

[MJ Ray]

Christian Perrier <bubulle at debian.org> wrote:
>  Please enter a space-separated list of devices, 'all', or 'none'. You may
>  omit the leading '/dev/' and just enter e.g. "md0 md1", or "md/1 md/d0".

Why use both sorts of quotes?

Please never use the Latin "e.g." instead of the English "for example".

>  [...] This is recommended unless multiple device (MD) support is
>  compiled into the kernel and all partitions are marked as belonging
>  to MD arrays, with type 0xfd (as those and only those will be started
>  automatically by the kernel).

I'm really not sure about the punctuation there.  How about:

This is recommended unless multiple device (MD) support is compiled
into the kernel and all partitions are marked as belonging to MD
arrays with type 0xfd.  (Only those will be started automatically by
the kernel.)

I'm not entirely clear what "marked as belonging to MD arrays" means
here.  Does it just mean "have type 0xfd"?  It's too late here now.

>  If the kernel supports it (>> 2.6.14), mdadm can periodically check the

What does much greater than 2.6.14 mean?

>  The default, if turned on, is to run the checks on the first Sunday of every
>  month at 01:06.

s/run the checks/check

>  It is recommended to enable this option.

Enabling this option is recommended.

Otherwise seems clear enough.

Regards,
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