[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 23/49: Improve wording and more "the" usage :)

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Author: Volkan Gezer <volkangezer at gmail.com>
Date:   Sun Jan 5 18:07:39 2014 +0100

    Improve wording and more "the" usage :)
    
    This should give at least better understandability to the manual for
    native speakers :).
---
 admin_manual/configuration/configuration_apps.rst  |  6 +++---
 admin_manual/configuration/configuration_users.rst |  4 ++--
 user_manual/files/files.rst                        |  2 +-
 user_manual/files/filesweb.rst                     | 15 ++++++++-------
 user_manual/index.rst                              |  2 ++
 5 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_apps.rst b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_apps.rst
index 2198ff2..09c1649 100644
--- a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_apps.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_apps.rst
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 Apps Configuration
 ==================
-After you have installed ownCloud you might realize that it would be nice to
+After you have installed ownCloud, you might realize that it would be nice to
 provide an additional function on top of the core functionality in your ownCloud installation.
 
 With ownCloud installation, you will find some apps enabled by default. To see which applications
-are enabled, click on Apps button on web interface navigation to go into applications page:
+are enabled, click on Apps button on the web interface navigation to go into applications page:
 
 .. figure:: ../images/oc_admin_app_page.png
 Administrator application page
 
 In this page, you can enable or disable applications simply by clicking on their names.
-Enabled applications will be shown in **bold**, while disabled ones will be shown in normal font.
+Enabled applications will be shown in **bold** while disabled ones will be shown in normal font.
 If the app is not developed by ownCloud, it will have the *3rd party* notice next to it. To see what an
 application does, clicking on its name will show a description on the right side of the same page.
 
diff --git a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_users.rst b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_users.rst
index 3c57da9..a6078b5 100644
--- a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_users.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_users.rst
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 User Management
 ===============
 
-ownCloud administrators can easily manage users via web interface. To go into
-user management page, click your username on web interface and select *Users*.
+ownCloud administrators can easily manage users via the web interface. To go into
+user management page, click your username on the web interface and select *Users*.
 A page similar to the image below will be shown:
 
 .. figure:: ../images/oc_admin_user_manage.png
diff --git a/user_manual/files/files.rst b/user_manual/files/files.rst
index 5e98d2d..5fe2b7f 100644
--- a/user_manual/files/files.rst
+++ b/user_manual/files/files.rst
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Accessing your Files (WebDav)
+Accessing your Files (WebDAV)
 =============================
 
 Your ownCloud instance can be accessed on every platform via the web interface. There are also options to integrate it with your desktop.
diff --git a/user_manual/files/filesweb.rst b/user_manual/files/filesweb.rst
index 2f48a77..f87f971 100644
--- a/user_manual/files/filesweb.rst
+++ b/user_manual/files/filesweb.rst
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Accessing your Files (Web Interface)
 ====================================
 
-Your ownCloud files can be accessed from anywhere by using your ownCloud web interface. In files app,
+Your ownCloud files can be accessed from anywhere by using your ownCloud's web interface. In the files app,
 you can view (if a common type), move, rename, download, share and delete your files easily. If versioning app is
 enabled, you can also revert a file to specific version. See :doc:`versioncontrol` for details.
 
@@ -10,7 +10,8 @@ Files app on ownCloud web interface
 
 With ownCloud 6, you can now see file thumbnails next to the filenames. By hovering your cursor on a file, you
 will be provided with some file operations. You can use rename, download, share buttons to perform those actions
-or click on the cross icon at the rightmost location to remove the hovered file.
+or click on the cross icon at the rightmost location to remove the hovered file. If the file is an editable
+office file, it will also show *Edit* button to open the file in documents app (if this app is enabled).
 
 Navigating inside your ownCloud
 -------------------------------
@@ -21,7 +22,7 @@ will show your current directory:
 .. figure:: ../images/oc_filesweb_navigate.png
 Navigation bar
 
-You can click on one of the upper directories to navigate up or use home icon to navigate into your root
+You can click on one of the upper directories to navigate up or use home icon to navigate back into your root
 folder.
 
 
@@ -36,7 +37,7 @@ New button options
 
 * *Text file* will create a simple text file and add into the current folder in your ownCloud.
 * *Folder* will create a folder in current folder.
-* *From link* will download the file from the provided link and place in the current folder.
+* *From link* will download the file from the provided link and place it into the current folder.
 
 
 Selecting files
@@ -62,9 +63,9 @@ In ownCloud web interface, file(s) can be moved by dragging and dropping them in
 Sharing files
 -------------
 
-Any file/folder on ownCloud can be shared to download with a local user, group or any person online with a public link. Shared files/folders will show a *Shared* text next to their filenames.
+Any file/folder on ownCloud can be shared to download with a local user, group or any person online with a public link. Shared files/folders will show a *Shared* text next to their names.
 
-To share a file/folder, hover your cursor on an item in files app and click *Share*. You will be provided with some options:
+To share a file/folder, hover your cursor on an item in the files app and click *Share*. You will be provided with some options:
 
 .. figure:: ../images/oc_files_share.png
 Share dialog
@@ -74,7 +75,7 @@ Share dialog
 * If you click on *Share link*, the other options will be visible. Since this link allows everyone
   to download this file/folder, you may want to protect this share with a password. To do that,
   click on *Password protect* and set a password.
-* If this share is a folder, you also will have an option to enable uploads into this folder using
+* If this share is a folder, you will also have an option to enable uploads into this folder using
   the provided link. This is very useful to collect files from multiple users into same place easily.
 * If your server is configured with a mail server, you can type e-mail addresses seperated with space to send the link to multiple users.
 * Finally, setting an expiration date will expiry the share after the specified date.
diff --git a/user_manual/index.rst b/user_manual/index.rst
index 7834789..a0c2cb2 100644
--- a/user_manual/index.rst
+++ b/user_manual/index.rst
@@ -21,6 +21,7 @@ Files & Synchronization
 =======================
 This chapter contains information about accessing your files via WebDAV and Synchronization.
 
+* :doc:`files/filesweb`
 * :doc:`files/files`
 * :doc:`files/sync`
 * :doc:`files/versioncontrol`
@@ -43,6 +44,7 @@ Contacts & Calendar web interface, export, import and synchronization.
 Documents
 =========
 Documents allows users collaboratively edit rich-text documents at the same time.
+
 * :doc:`documents`
 
 Bookmarks

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