[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 02/14: Fixes according to MorrisJobke's comments

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commit aa6c727734c8b20999d1d1483e9dc5bd0d325006
Author: RandolfCarter <RandolphCarter at fantasymail.de>
Date:   Sun Jun 1 22:37:45 2014 +0200

    Fixes according to MorrisJobke's comments
---
 .../configuration/configuration_database.rst       | 24 +++++++++++-----------
 admin_manual/installation/installation_source.rst  |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_database.rst b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_database.rst
index 7d2d527..2bbd9a6 100644
--- a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_database.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_database.rst
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ You can quit the prompt by entering::
 
   quit
 
-An ownCloud configured with MySQL would contain the hostname on which the
-database is running, a valid username and password to access it, and the
+An ownCloud instance configured with MySQL would contain the hostname on which
+the database is running, a valid username and password to access it, and the
 name of the database. The :file:`config/config.php` as created by the
 :doc:`installation/installation_wizard` would therefore contain entries like
 this:
@@ -114,11 +114,11 @@ It is not necessary to create a database and a database user in advance
 because this will automatically be done by ownCloud when you login for the
 first time.
 
-An ownCloud configured to use sqlite only needs to contain the reference to a
-writable data directory (which is required for the rest of ownCloud's operation
-as well anyway). The :file:`config/config.php` as created by the
-:doc:`installation/installation_wizard` could therefore contain entries like
-this:
+An ownCloud instance configured to use sqlite only needs to contain the
+reference to a writable data directory (which is required for successful
+operation of ownCloud in general anyway). The :file:`config/config.php` as
+created by the :doc:`installation/installation_wizard` could therefore contain
+entries like this:
 
 
 .. code-block:: php
@@ -175,9 +175,9 @@ You can quit the prompt by entering::
 
   \q
 
-An ownCloud configured with PostgreSQL would contain the hostname on which the
-database is running, a valid username and password to access it, and the
-name of the database. The :file:`config/config.php` as created by the
+An ownCloud instance configured with PostgreSQL would contain the hostname on
+which the database is running, a valid username and password to access it, and
+the name of the database. The :file:`config/config.php` as created by the
 :doc:`installation/installation_wizard` would therefore contain entries like
 this:
 
@@ -249,8 +249,8 @@ You can quit the prompt by entering::
 
   exit
 
-An ownCloud configured with Oracle would contain the hostname on which the
-database is running, a valid username and password to access it, and the
+An ownCloud instance configured with Oracle would contain the hostname on which
+the database is running, a valid username and password to access it, and the
 name of the database. The :file:`config/config.php` as created by the
 :doc:`installation/installation_wizard` would therefore contain entries like
 this:
diff --git a/admin_manual/installation/installation_source.rst b/admin_manual/installation/installation_source.rst
index ced6fd5..793a4da 100644
--- a/admin_manual/installation/installation_source.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/installation/installation_source.rst
@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ Microsoft Internet Information Server (IIS)
 See :doc:`installation_windows` for further instructions.
 
 Install Wizard
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 The last thing to do is to click through the installation wizard.
 

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