[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 50/80: fix broken English

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commit 9417a06777272767425c6590f72c2040c11bd3f8
Author: Caleb Maclennan <caleb at alerque.com>
Date:   Wed Mar 19 00:08:38 2014 +0200

    fix broken English
    
    several bits were un-clear and there were a number of grammar issues
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 user_manual/files/encryption.rst | 41 +++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

diff --git a/user_manual/files/encryption.rst b/user_manual/files/encryption.rst
index 6cd49fc..57c7a57 100644
--- a/user_manual/files/encryption.rst
+++ b/user_manual/files/encryption.rst
@@ -1,57 +1,54 @@
 Files Encryption
 ================
 
-ownCloud ships a encryption app, which allows to encrypt all files stored in
-your ownCloud. Once the encryption app was enabled by the admin all your files
+ownCloud ships a encryption app, which enables encryption of all files stored in
+your ownCloud. Once the encryption app is enabled by the admin, all your files
 will be encrypted automatically. Encryption and decryption always happens
 server-side. This enables the user to continue to use all the other apps to
-view and edit his data. But this also means that the server administrator could
-intercept your data. Server-Side encryption is especially interesting if you
+view and edit their data. But this also means that the server administrator could
+intercept your data. Server-Side encryption is especially useful if you
 use external storages. This way you can make sure that the storage provider is
 not able to read your data.
 
-Please remember. Once the encryption app is enabled you need your log-in
-password to decrypt and access your data. By default your data will be lost if
-you loss your log-in password. If you want to protect yourself against password
-loss store your log-in password on a secure place or enable the recovery key
-as described below.
+Please remember. Once the encryption app is enabled your log-in password is required
+to decrypt and access your data. By default your data will be lost if
+you lose your log-in password. If you want to protect yourself against password
+loss, store your log-in password in a secure place or enable the recovery-key
+feature as described below.
 
 What gets encrypted
 -------------------
 
-The current version encrypts all your files stored in ownCloud.
-
-At the moment we don't encrypt:
+The current version encrypts all your files stored in ownCloud except the following:
 
 - old files in the trash bin (files which were deleted before the encryption app was enabled)
 - image thumbnails from the gallery app and previews from the files app
 - search index from the full text search app
 
-All this data is stored directly on your ownCloud server, so you don't have to worry to expose
+All this data is stored directly on your ownCloud server, so you don't have to worry about exposing
 your data to a third party storage provider.
 
 Decrypt your data again
 -----------------------
 
-If the encryption app was disabled users can decrypt their files again in their
-personal settings. After this was done they can continue to use their ownCloud
-without encryption.
-
+If the encryption app is disabled after users have already stored encrypted data, users
+will be promted to decrypt their files again in their personal settings. After this is
+done, they can continue to use their ownCloud without encryption.
 
 Settings
 --------
 
-Once the encryption app is enabled you will find some additional settings on
+Once the encryption app is enabled, you will find some additional settings on
 your personal settings page.
 
 Recovery Key
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-If the admin enabled the recovery-key you can decide by your own if you
-want to use this feature for your account. If you enable "Password recovery"
+If the admin enabled the recovery-key feature you can decide for yourself if
+you want to use this feature for your account. If you enable "Password recovery"
 the admin will be able to read your data with a special password. This allows
-him to recover your files in case of password loss. If the recovery-key is not
-enabled than there is no way to restore your files if you loss your log-in
+him to recover your files in the event you lose your password. If the recovery-key
+is not enabled than there is no way to restore your files if you lose your log-in
 password.
 
 Change Private Key Password

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