[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 260/270: Improve some wording

[David Prévot]

This is an automated email from the git hooks/post-receive script.

taffit pushed a commit to branch master
in repository owncloud-doc.

commit 8c029ef2e597af66ff8ea561d0ee40a7cb409acb
Author: Jos Poortvliet <jospoortvliet at gmail.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 28 14:16:11 2014 +0200

    Improve some wording
---
 developer_manual/testing/index.rst | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/developer_manual/testing/index.rst b/developer_manual/testing/index.rst
index a824ffa..9f04ed2 100644
--- a/developer_manual/testing/index.rst
+++ b/developer_manual/testing/index.rst
@@ -7,15 +7,15 @@ ownCloud Test Pilots
    :hidden:
 
 
-The ownCloud Test Pilots take care of helping to test and improve different server setups with ownCloud. 
+The ownCloud Test Pilots help to test and improve different server and client setups with ownCloud. 
 
 Why do you want to join
 -----------------------
-There are many different setups and people have different interests. If you want ownCloud to run well on NginX for instance someone has to test this configuration.
+There are many different setups and people have different interests. If we want ownCloud to run well on NginX for instance someone has to test this configuration.
 
-Furthermore, during bug fixing the ownCloud developers often do not have the possibility to reproduce the bug in a given environment nor they are able confirm that it was fixed. As a member of the Test Pilot Team you could act as a contact person for a specific area to help developers **fix the bugs you care about**.
+Furthermore, during bug fixing the ownCloud developers often do not have the possibility to reproduce the bug in a given environment nor they are able confirm that it was fixed. As a member of the Test Pilot Team you could act as a contact person for a specific area to help developers **fix the bugs you care about**. Testing ownCloud before it is released is the best way of making sure it does what you need it to!
 
-Another benefit is a more efficient relationship to the developers: **You know what people are responsible for which parts** and it is easier to get help. 
+Another benefit is a closer relationship to the developers: **You know what people are responsible for which parts** and it is easier to get help.
 
 If you want you will be listed as an active contributor on the `owncloud.org <http://owncloud.org>`_ page.
 

-- 
Alioth's /usr/local/bin/git-commit-notice on /srv/git.debian.org/git/pkg-owncloud/owncloud-doc.git