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Author: Carla Schroder <carla at owncloud.com>
Date:   Tue Aug 12 15:36:07 2014 -0700

    This has edits per pull request discussion: line wrap at 80, and added missing markup
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diff --git a/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst b/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst
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--- a/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst
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 Configuring Server-to-Server Sharing
 ========================================
 
-ownCloud 7 introduces a powerful new feature, server-to-server sharing. With just a few clicks you can easily and securely create public shares for sharing files and directories with other ownCloud 7 servers. You can automatically send an email notification when you create the share, add password protection, allow users to upload files, and set an expiration date.
+ownCloud 7 introduces a powerful new feature, server-to-server sharing. With 
+just a few clicks you can easily and securely create public shares for sharing 
+files and directories with other ownCloud 7 servers. You can automatically send 
+an email notification when you create the share, add password protection, allow 
+users to upload files, and set an expiration date.
 
 Follow these steps to create a new public share:
 
-1. Go to admin > Admin in your ownCloud Web control panel, and scroll to the Remote Shares section.
+1. Go to ``admin > Admin`` in your ownCloud Web control panel, and scroll to 
+the Remote Shares section.
 
    .. figure:: ../images/remote_shares.png
    
-2. To enable server-to-server sharing, and to allow remote users to mount your shares in their ownCloud 7 accounts, check ``Allow other instances to mount public links shared from this server.`` Leaving the checkbox blank disables server-to-server sharing.
-
-3. You can enable the users on your local ownCloud server to create their own public shares by checking ``Allow users to mount public link shares.`` Leaving this unchecked disables user-created public shares.
+2. To enable server-to-server sharing, and to allow remote users to mount your 
+shares in their ownCloud 7 accounts, check ``Allow other instances to mount 
+public links shared from this server.`` Leaving the checkbox blank disables 
+server-to-server sharing.
+
+3. You can enable the users on your local ownCloud server to create their own 
+public shares by checking ``Allow users to mount public link shares.`` Leaving 
+this unchecked disables user-created public shares.
   
-4. Now go to your Files page and hover your cursor over the file or directory you want to share to expose the administration options. Check the ``Share Link`` checkbox to create the share, and to expose all of your sharing options.
+4. Now go to your Files page and hover your cursor over the file or directory 
+you want to share to expose the administration options. Check the ``Share 
+Link`` checkbox to create the share, and to expose all of your sharing options.
 
    .. figure:: ../images/create_public_share.png
    
-Your new public share is labeled with a chain link. If you do not protect it with a password, it is visible to anyone who has the URL. Users on other ownCloud 7 servers can mount it and use it just like any ownCloud share. 
+Your new public share is labeled with a chain link. If you do not protect it 
+with a password, it is visible to anyone who has the URL. Users on other 
+ownCloud 7 servers can mount it and use it just like any ownCloud share. 
 
 Un-check the ``Share Link`` checkbox to disable the share.
 
-See "Using Server-to-Server Sharing" in the Users Manual to learn how to connect to a remote public share.
+See "Using Server-to-Server Sharing" in the Users Manual to learn how to 
+connect to a remote public share.
 
 Notes
 --------
 
-Your Apache Web server must have ``mod_rewrite`` enabled, and you must have ``trusted_domains`` configured in ``config.php``. Consider also enabling SSL to encrypt all traffic between your servers. (See "Manual Installation" in the Administrators Manual to learn more about mod_rewrite, SSL, and alternative HTTP servers. See "Installation Wizard" in the Administrators Manual to learn more about configuring trusted domains.)
-
-Your ownCloud server creates the share link from the URL that you used to log into the server, so make sure that you log into your server using a URL that is accessible to your users. For example, if you log in via its LAN IP address, such as http://192.168.10.50, then your share URL will be something like http://192.168.10.50/owncloud/public.php?service=files&t=6b6fa9a714a32ef0af8a83dde358deec, which is not accessible outside of your LAN. This also applies to using the server name; for  [...]
+Your Apache Web server must have ``mod_rewrite`` enabled, and you must have 
+``trusted_domains`` configured in ``config.php``. Consider also enabling SSL to 
+encrypt all traffic between your servers. (See "Manual Installation" in the 
+Administrators Manual to learn more about mod_rewrite, SSL, and alternative 
+HTTP servers. See "Installation Wizard" in the Administrators Manual to learn 
+more about configuring trusted domains.)
+
+Your ownCloud server creates the share link from the URL that you used to log 
+into the server, so make sure that you log into your server using a URL that is 
+accessible to your users. For example, if you log in via its LAN IP address, 
+such as ``http://192.168.10.50``, then your share URL will be something like 
+``http://192.168.10.50/owncloud/public.php?service=files&t=
+6b6fa9a714a32ef0af8a83dde358deec``, which is not accessible outside of your 
+LAN. This also applies to using the server name; for access outside of your LAN 
+you need to use a fully-qualified domain name such as 
+``http://myserver.example.com``, rather than ``http://myserver``.
 

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