[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 29/227: Some small clarity fixes.

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commit 35c5bf911644cc8ce3bbb7be95fcad45a20b1062
Author: Carla Schroder <carla at owncloud.com>
Date:   Thu Aug 28 20:13:39 2014 -0700

    Some small clarity fixes.
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 admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst b/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst
index b9b800e..ef9ea44 100644
--- a/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/configuration/server_to_server_managing.rst
@@ -3,16 +3,16 @@ Configuring Server-to-Server Sharing
 
 ownCloud 7 introduces a powerful new feature, server-to-server sharing. With 
 just a few clicks you can easily and securely create public shares for sharing 
-files and directories with other ownCloud 7 servers. You can automatically send 
-an email notification when you create the share, add password protection, allow 
-users to upload files, and set an expiration date.
+files and directories with other ownCloud 7 servers. (Currently, this works only 
+with OC7 and not older versions.)  You can automatically send an email 
+notification when you create the share, add password protection, allow users to 
+upload files, and set an expiration date.
 
 Follow these steps to create a new public share:
 
-1. Go to ``admin > Admin`` in your ownCloud Web control panel, and scroll to 
-the Remote Shares section.
+1. Go to the Admin page and scroll to the Remote Shares section.
 
-   .. figure:: ../images/remote_shares.png
+.. figure:: ../images/remote_shares.png
    
 2. To enable server-to-server sharing, and to allow remote users to mount your 
 shares in their ownCloud 7 accounts, check ``Allow other instances to mount 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ this unchecked disables user-created public shares.
 you want to share to expose the administration options. Check the ``Share 
 Link`` checkbox to create the share, and to expose all of your sharing options.
 
-   .. figure:: ../images/create_public_share.png
+.. figure:: ../images/create_public_share.png
    
 Your new public share is labeled with a chain link. If you do not protect it 
 with a password, it is visible to anyone who has the URL. Users on other 

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