[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 75/227: Markup and typo corrections

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commit 6a7759f12d919daed8a6d9b45fce9815db9cb323
Author: Carla Schroder <carla at owncloud.com>
Date:   Sat Sep 6 15:54:56 2014 -0700

    Markup and typo corrections
---
 admin_manual/maintenance/update.rst  | 16 +++++++++-------
 admin_manual/maintenance/upgrade.rst |  7 +++----
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/admin_manual/maintenance/update.rst b/admin_manual/maintenance/update.rst
index 63f9c64..b7005d9 100644
--- a/admin_manual/maintenance/update.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/maintenance/update.rst
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ version number.)
 
 Major releases are indicated by the first and second digits. So 4.5.0, 5.0.0, 
 6.0.0, and 7.0.0 are major releases. The Updater app is not for upgrades; 
-please see foo for instructions on upgrading to a major release.
+please see :doc:`upgrade` for instructions on upgrading to a major release.
 
 .. note:: If you installed ownCloud from your Linux distribution repositories 
    using your package manager, then it is best to update/upgrade ownCloud using 
@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@ instance by default, which you can easily confirm by looking on your Apps page.
 The Updater app performs these operations:
 
 * Creates a ``backup`` directory under your ownCloud data directory
-* Extracts updated package content into the ``backup/packageVersion`` directory
+* Download and xtracts updated package content into the 
+  ``backup/packageVersion`` directory
 * Makes a copy of your current ownCloud instance, except for your data 
   directory, to  ``backup/currentVersion-randomstring``
 * Moves all directories except ``data``, ``config`` and ``themes`` from the 
@@ -71,13 +72,14 @@ steps:
 .. figure:: ../images/updater-6.png
 
 8. It works for a few minutes, and when it's finished displays a success 
-   message, which disappears after a short time. Refresh your Admin page to 
-   verify your new version number.
-
+   message, which disappears after a short time. 
+   
 .. figure:: ../images/updater-7.png
 
-If the Update app fails, then you must update manually. See foo doc to learn 
-how to upgrade manually. 
+Refresh your Admin page to verify your new version number.
+
+If the Update app fails, then you must update manually. See :doc:`upgrade` to 
+learn how to upgrade manually. 
 
 
 
diff --git a/admin_manual/maintenance/upgrade.rst b/admin_manual/maintenance/upgrade.rst
index 0fdcca2..b96b981 100644
--- a/admin_manual/maintenance/upgrade.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/maintenance/upgrade.rst
@@ -22,9 +22,8 @@ Manual Upgrade Procedure
 ------------------------
 
 Start by putting your server in maintenance mode. Do this by entering your 
-``config.php`` file and changing `` "maintenance" => false,`` to `` 
-"maintenance" => true,``. This kicks out any logged-in users, and prevents new 
-logins.
+``config.php`` file and changing ``'maintenance' => false,`` to ``'maintenance' 
+=> true,``. This kicks out any logged-in users, and prevents new logins.
 
 1. Ensure that you are running the latest point release of your current major 
    ownCloud version.
@@ -109,7 +108,7 @@ or command line method as follows:
    ownCloud to your new ownCloud version.
 
 10. If you keep your ``data/`` directory in your ``owncloud/`` directory, copy 
-    it from your old version of ownCloud to the ``owncloud/``directory of your 
+    it from your old version of ownCloud to the ``owncloud/`` directory of your 
     new ownCloud version. If you keep it outside of ``owncloud/`` then you 
     don't have to do anything with it.
 

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