[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-doc] 208/227: Updating Encryption app intro

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commit e9e08b33b4e3d2dff13ffc9e51651418c6572a6a
Author: MTRichards <matt at owncloud.com>
Date:   Fri Oct 3 09:12:52 2014 -0400

    Updating Encryption app intro
    
    Updated introduction paragraph for grammar and typos
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 admin_manual/configuration/configuration_encryption.rst | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_encryption.rst b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_encryption.rst
index 64cf0b6..586311b 100644
--- a/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_encryption.rst
+++ b/admin_manual/configuration/configuration_encryption.rst
@@ -1,17 +1,16 @@
 Use Server-Side Encryption
 ==========================
 
-ownCloud ships En encryption app, which allows to encrypt all files stored in
-your ownCloud. Encryption and decryption always happen on the server-side. This
-enables the user to continue to use all the other apps to view and edit his
+ownCloud ships a server side encryption app, which encrypts all files at rest 
+on the server. Encryption and decryption always happen on the server-side. 
+This enables the user to continue to use all the other apps to view and edit 
 data. The Encryption app is meant to protect user data on external storage.
 
-The app uses the user's log-in password as encryption-password. This means that
-by default the user will lose access to his files if he loses his log-in
-password.
+The app uses the user's log-in password as an encryption-password. This means that
+by default the user will lose access to his files if he loses his log-in password.
 
-It might be a good idea to make regular backups of all encryption keys. The
-encryption keys are stored in following folders:
+It is recommended that the server admin regularly backup all encryption keys, to 
+prevent permanent data loss. The encryption keys are stored in following folders:
 
 * data/owncloud_private_key (recovery key, if enabled and public share key)
 * data/public-keys (public keys from all users)

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