[Pkg-owncloud-commits] [owncloud-client] 235/484: some doc fixes & updates

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commit a59c3ef278eb9d481f9126aa6fb2c4f95c2e9d23
Author: Carla Schroder <carla at owncloud.com>
Date:   Mon Nov 2 11:18:31 2015 -0800

    some doc fixes & updates
---
 doc/autoupdate.rst   | 8 ++++----
 doc/installing.rst   | 6 +++++-
 doc/introduction.rst | 7 ++++---
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/autoupdate.rst b/doc/autoupdate.rst
index 2ed72aa..6dabaec 100644
--- a/doc/autoupdate.rst
+++ b/doc/autoupdate.rst
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ the Updater will check for updates and notify you when a new version is
 available.
 
 .. note:: Because of various technical issues, desktop sync clients older than 
-   1.7 will not be allowed to connect and sync with the ownCloud 8.1 server. It is 
-   highly recommended to keep your client updated.
+   1.7 will not be allowed to connect and sync with the ownCloud 8.1+ server. It 
+   is highly recommended to keep your client updated.
 
 Basic Workflow
 --------------
@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@ To prevent automatic updates, but allow manual overrides:
 
 1. Edit these Registry keys:
 
-    a. (32-bit) ``HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\Software\ownCloud\ownCloud``
-    b. (64-bit) ``HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\Software\Wow6432Node\ownCloud\ownCloud``
+    a. (32-bit-Windows) ``HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\Software\ownCloud\ownCloud``
+    b. (64-bit-Windows) ``HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\Software\Wow6432Node\ownCloud\ownCloud``
 
 2. Add the key ``skipUpdateCheck`` (of type DWORD).
 
diff --git a/doc/installing.rst b/doc/installing.rst
index b01f1e5..e04c896 100644
--- a/doc/installing.rst
+++ b/doc/installing.rst
@@ -3,7 +3,8 @@ Installing the Desktop Synchronization Client
 =============================================
 
 You can download the  latest version of the ownCloud Desktop Synchronization 
-Client from the `ownCloud Website <https://owncloud.org/install/#desktop>`_. 
+Client from the `ownCloud download page 
+<https://owncloud.org/install/#desktop>`_. 
 There are clients for Linux, Mac OS X, and Microsoft Windows.
 
 Installation on Mac OS X and Windows is the same as for any software 
@@ -21,6 +22,9 @@ will display a notification when an update is available.
 Linux users must also have a password manager enabled, such as GNOME Keyring or
 KWallet, so that the sync client can login automatically.
 
+You will also find links to source code archives and older versions on the 
+download page.
+
 Installation Wizard
 -------------------
 
diff --git a/doc/introduction.rst b/doc/introduction.rst
index a2021da..df13d9c 100644
--- a/doc/introduction.rst
+++ b/doc/introduction.rst
@@ -13,14 +13,15 @@ Your files are always automatically synchronized between your ownCloud server
 and local PC.
 
 .. note:: Because of various technical issues, desktop sync clients older than 
-   1.7 will not allowed to connect and sync with the ownCloud 8.1 server. It is 
-   highly recommended to keep your client updated.
+   1.7 will not allowed to connect and sync with the ownCloud 8.1+ server. It 
+   is highly recommended to keep your client updated.
    
 Improvements and New Features
 -----------------------------
 
 The 2.0 release of the ownCloud desktop sync client has many new features and 
-improvements.
+improvements. (See the `complete changelog 
+<https://owncloud.org/changelog/desktop/>`_.)
 
   * Multi-account support
   * Many UI improvements

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