r23208 - in /trunk/jifty/debian: README.Debian control

[gregoa at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: gregoa
Date: Mon Jul 14 20:25:55 2008
New Revision: 23208

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-perl/?sc=1&rev=23208
Log:
slight wording changes

Modified:
    trunk/jifty/debian/README.Debian
    trunk/jifty/debian/control

Modified: trunk/jifty/debian/README.Debian
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-perl/trunk/jifty/debian/README.Debian?rev=23208&op=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/jifty/debian/README.Debian (original)
+++ trunk/jifty/debian/README.Debian Mon Jul 14 20:25:55 2008
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-The dependency chain with javascript libraries installs apache2 with jifty.
-You can safely remove it on a desktop developer.
+The dependency chain with javascript libraries might install apache2 with jifty.
+You can safely remove it on a developer's desktop machine.
 Or remove apache2 and use lighttpd.
 
 libjifty-perl can be used alone on servers. The main jifty package add more

Modified: trunk/jifty/debian/control
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-perl/trunk/jifty/debian/control?rev=23208&op=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/jifty/debian/control (original)
+++ trunk/jifty/debian/control Mon Jul 14 20:25:55 2008
@@ -140,8 +140,10 @@
  libjifty-plugin-editinplace-perl libjifty-plugin-wikitoolbar-perl
 Description:  Jifty perl libraries
  This package provides perl libraries for Jifty framework. 
+ .
  You can use this package alone or with suggested plugins to run your jifty
  applications on your servers. 
+ .
  Use jifty metapackage to add more examples when you write application on your
  desktop.
 
@@ -151,16 +153,14 @@
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, perl (>> 5.8.3), libjifty-perl,
  libauthen-cas-client-perl
 Description: Jifty plugin for Jasig CAS authentication
- This package allows using or mixing Jasig CAS authentication to your Jifty
- application.
+ This package adds Jasig CAS authentication to your Jifty application.
 
 Package: libjifty-plugin-authentication-ldap-perl
 Section: perl
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, perl (>> 5.8.3), libjifty-perl, libnet-ldap-perl
 Description: Jifty plugin for Ldap authentication
- This package allows using or mixing Ldap authentication to your Jifty
- application.
+ This package adds Ldap authentication to your Jifty application.
 
 Package: libjifty-plugin-openid-perl
 Section: perl
@@ -169,8 +169,7 @@
  libcrypt-dh-perl, libnet-openid-consumer-perl, libcache-cache-perl,
  liblwpx-paranoidagent-perl
 Description: Jifty plugin for OpenID authentication
- This package allows using or mixing OpenID authentication to your Jifty
- application.
+ This package adds OpenID authentication to your Jifty application.
 
 Package: libjifty-plugin-chart-perl
 Section: perl
@@ -244,7 +243,7 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, perl (>> 5.8.3), libjifty-perl
 Description: Jifty plugin to add a wiki toolbar to your textarea box 
- This plugin provides a way to include a toolbar widget to your text area.
+ This plugin provides a way to add a toolbar widget to your text area.
 
 Package: libjifty-plugin-authzldap-perl
 Section: perl