[libconfig-model-systemd-perl] 01/04: control: improved description (Closes: #823898)

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commit f2bd6b8d389ebf7e1467e4fb9c59c5695b620689
Author: Dominique Dumont <dod at debian.org>
Date:   Thu May 12 19:19:06 2016 +0200

    control: improved description (Closes: #823898)
    
    Thanks to Beatrice and Justin for the suggestions
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 debian/control | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index d08afd0..5e07799 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -25,13 +25,14 @@ Depends: ${misc:Depends},
          liblog-log4perl-perl,
          libmouse-perl,
          libpath-tiny-perl (>= 0.086)
-Description: Edit and validate Systemd configuration files
+Description: editor and validator for systemd configuration files
  Config::Model::Systemd provides a configuration editor for the
- configuration file of Systemd, i.e. all files in
- ~/.config/systemd/user/ or all files in /etc/systemd/system/ Ok.
+ configuration files of systemd, (that is, all files in
+ ~/.config/systemd/user/ or all files in /etc/systemd/system/).
  .
- This was quite simplified. Actually, this module provides the
- configuration models of Systemd configuration file that cme,
+ The first paragraph is a simplified view.
+ In more acurate and complicated words, this package provides the
+ configuration model of Systemd configuration that cme,
  Config::Model and Config::Model::TkUI use to provide a configuration
  editor and checker.
 Homepage: https://metacpan.org/pod/Config::Model::Systemd

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