[Pkg-shadow-commits] r3008 - in upstream/trunk: . man

[Nicolas FRANÇOIS]

Author: nekral-guest
Date: 2009-05-26 19:23:40 +0000 (Tue, 26 May 2009)
New Revision: 3008

Modified:
   upstream/trunk/ChangeLog
   upstream/trunk/man/gpasswd.1.xml
Log:
	* man/gpasswd.1.xml: Ease the translation of the refpurpose.
	* man/gpasswd.1.xml: Fix typo, shorten sentences.


Modified: upstream/trunk/ChangeLog
===================================================================
--- upstream/trunk/ChangeLog	2009-05-26 17:00:58 UTC (rev 3007)
+++ upstream/trunk/ChangeLog	2009-05-26 19:23:40 UTC (rev 3008)
@@ -1,5 +1,10 @@
 2009-05-26  Nicolas François  <nicolas.francois at centraliens.net>
 
+	* man/gpasswd.1.xml: Ease the translation of the refpurpose.
+	* man/gpasswd.1.xml: Fix typo, shorten sentences.
+
+2009-05-26  Nicolas François  <nicolas.francois at centraliens.net>
+
 	* man/pwck.8.xml, man/grpck.8.xml: Move the SEE ALSO section at
 	the end.
 

Modified: upstream/trunk/man/gpasswd.1.xml
===================================================================
--- upstream/trunk/man/gpasswd.1.xml	2009-05-26 17:00:58 UTC (rev 3007)
+++ upstream/trunk/man/gpasswd.1.xml	2009-05-26 19:23:40 UTC (rev 3008)
@@ -46,10 +46,13 @@
   <refnamediv id='name'>
     <refname>gpasswd</refname>
     <refpurpose>
-      administer the <filename>/etc/group</filename>
-      <phrase condition="gshadow">and <filename>/etc/gshadow</filename>
-      files</phrase>
-      <phrase condition="no_gshadow">file</phrase>
+      <phrase condition="no_gshadow">
+	administer <filename>/etc/group</filename>
+      </phrase>
+      <phrase condition="gshadow">
+	administer <filename>/etc/group</filename> and
+	<filename>/etc/gshadow</filename>
+      </phrase>
     </refpurpose>
   </refnamediv>
   <!-- body begins here -->
@@ -78,7 +81,7 @@
     <para condition="gshadow">
       System administrators can use the <option>-A</option> option to define
       group administrator(s) and the <option>-M</option> option to define
-      members and has all rights of group administrators and members.
+      members. They have all rights of group administrators and members.
     </para>
     <para>
       <command>gpasswd</command> called by