[Pkg-silc-commits] r90 - /silc-client/trunk/debian/control

[lunar at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: lunar
Date: Sun Jun 17 23:21:06 2007
New Revision: 90

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-silc/?sc=1&rev=90
Log:
Proofread packages description with a native speaker!

Modified:
    silc-client/trunk/debian/control

Modified: silc-client/trunk/debian/control
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-silc/silc-client/trunk/debian/control?rev=90&op=diff
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--- silc-client/trunk/debian/control (original)
+++ silc-client/trunk/debian/control Sun Jun 17 23:21:06 2007
@@ -16,25 +16,27 @@
  .
  SILC (Secure Internet Live Conferencing) is a protocol which provides
  secure conferencing services in the Internet over insecure channel.
- SILC is IRC like softwarre although internally they are very different.
- Biggest similarity between SILC and IRC is that they both provide
+ SILC is like IRC although internally they are very different.
+ The biggest similarity between SILC and IRC is that they both provide
  conferencing services and that SILC has almost same commands as IRC.  Other
- than that they are nothing alike.  Biggest differences are that SILC is
- secure what IRC is not in any way.  The network model is also entirely
- different compared to IRC.
+ than that they are nothing alike.  The biggest differences are that SILC is
+ secure and IRC is not in any way.  The network model is also entirely
+ different to IRC.
+ .
+  Homepage: http://www.silcnet.org/software/users/client/
 
 Package: irssi-plugin-silc
 Architecture: any
 Depends: irssi, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: libmime-perl, libmailtools-perl, libfile-mmagic-perl, libio-stringy-perl, libfile-temp-perl
 Description: SILC plugin for irssi
- A plugin to connect SILC networks using irssi.
+ A plugin to connect to SILC networks using irssi.
  .
  SILC (Secure Internet Live Conferencing) is a protocol which provides
  secure conferencing services in the Internet over insecure channel.
- SILC is IRC like softwarre although internally they are very different.
- Biggest similarity between SILC and IRC is that they both provide
+ SILC is like IRC although internally they are very different.
+ The biggest similarity between SILC and IRC is that they both provide
  conferencing services and that SILC has almost same commands as IRC.  Other
- than that they are nothing alike.  Biggest differences are that SILC is
- secure what IRC is not in any way.  The network model is also entirely
- different compared to IRC.
+ than that they are nothing alike.  The biggest differences are that SILC is
+ secure and IRC is not in any way.  The network model is also entirely
+ different to IRC.