[Pkg-silc-commits] r160 - in /silc-server/trunk/debian: control templates

[lunar at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: lunar
Date: Wed Sep  5 05:40:48 2007
New Revision: 160

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-silc/?sc=1&rev=160
Log:
Make various fixes to the package description and templates after reviews by
native english speakers.

Modified:
    silc-server/trunk/debian/control
    silc-server/trunk/debian/templates

Modified: silc-server/trunk/debian/control
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-silc/silc-server/trunk/debian/control?rev=160&op=diff
==============================================================================
--- silc-server/trunk/debian/control (original)
+++ silc-server/trunk/debian/control Wed Sep  5 05:40:48 2007
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: libsilc-1.1-2 (>= 1.1.2-3), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ucf
 Provides: silc-server
-Description: server for the Secure Live Internet Conferencing (SILC) protocol
- silc-server is a server for the SILC protocol.
+Description: server for the SILC protocol
+ SILC (Secure Internet Live Conferencing) is a network protocol designed
+ to provide end-to-end security for conferencing services. SILC has a
+ command set and a user interface similar to IRC, but the network
+ protocol is completely different as it supports public key strong
+ cryptography and a different network model.
  .
- SILC (Secure Internet Live Conferencing) is a protocol which provides
- secure conferencing services in the Internet over insecure channel.
- SILC is IRC like softwarre although internally they are very different.
- Biggest similarity between SILC and IRC is that they both provide
- conferencing services and that SILC has almost same commands as IRC.  Other
- than that they are nothing alike.  Biggest differences are that SILC is
- secure what IRC is not in any way.  The network model is also entirely
- different compared to IRC.
+ This package provides a system daemon that can act as a SILC router or
+ server.
+ .
+  Homepage: http://silcnet.org/software/users/server/

Modified: silc-server/trunk/debian/templates
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-silc/silc-server/trunk/debian/templates?rev=160&op=diff
==============================================================================
--- silc-server/trunk/debian/templates (original)
+++ silc-server/trunk/debian/templates Wed Sep  5 05:40:48 2007
@@ -1,42 +1,42 @@
 Template: silcd/server-name
 Type: string
 _Description: silcd server name:
- Please enter the name of the SILC server. (e.g. Some random SILC server)
+ Please enter the name of the SILC server (e.g. "Our SILC server").
 
 Template: silcd/host-name
 Type: string
 _Description: silcd hostname:
- Please enter the hostname (or the IP address) of the SILC server.
- (e.g. silc.example.com)
+ Please enter the hostname (or the IP address) of the SILC server
+ (e.g. silc.example.org).
 
 Template: silcd/real-name
 Type: string
 _Description: silcd administrator real name:
- Please enter the real name of the operator running the SILC server.
- (e.g. Foo T. Bar)
+ Please enter the real name of the operator running the SILC server
+ (e.g. "J. Random Operator").
  .
  This field may be left empty.
 
 Template: silcd/email
 Type: string
 _Description: silcd administrator email address:
- Please enter the email address of the operator running the SILC server.
- (e.g. silc at example.com)
+ Please enter the email address of the operator running the SILC server
+ (e.g. silc at example.org).
  .
  This field may be left empty.
 
 Template: silcd/organization
 Type: string
 _Description: silcd organization:
- Please enter the organization running the SILC server.
- (e.g. Some Organization)
+ Please enter the organization running the SILC server
+ (e.g. "Our Organization").
  .
  This field may be left empty.
 
 Template: silcd/country
 Type: string
 _Description: silcd location:
- Please enter the country where is located the SILC server.
+ Please enter the country where the SILC server is located.
  .
  This field may be left empty.
 
@@ -45,13 +45,14 @@
 _Description: silcd administrator nickname:
  Please enter the nickname of the administrator of the SILC server.
  .
- Administrator will need to use this nickname in order to authenticate
- herself.
+ The administrator will need to use this nickname in order to authenticate.
 
 Template: silcd/admin-passphrase
 Type: password
 _Description: silcd administrator passphrase:
- Please enter the passphrase that will authenticate the SILC server
- administrator.
+ Please enter the passphrase for the SILC server administrator.
  .
- Admnisitrator will need to enter this passphrase to authenticate herself.
+ The administrator will need to use this passphrase in order to authenticate.
+ .
+ Please note that it will be stored in an unencrypted form in a configuration
+ file.