[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar-toolkit] 15/21: Modernize long description, based on upstream wiki phrases.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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js pushed a commit to annotated tag debian/0.88.1-4
in repository sugar-toolkit.

commit b373f475a907c13f61f8541acf04a86faa5ec444
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Sun Jun 30 20:07:59 2013 +0200

    Modernize long description, based on upstream wiki phrases.
---
 debian/control.in | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in b/debian/control.in
index 7f70f29..c8b7339 100644
--- a/debian/control.in
+++ b/debian/control.in
@@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ Provides: ${python:Provides}, ${cdbs:Provides}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
 Description: Sugar graphical shell - core widgets
- Sugar is a graphical user interface aimed at children.
- .
- Originating as intregral part of the OLPC "XO" a.k.a. the $100 laptop,
- Sugar has since grown into a more widely usable low-ressource desktop
- environment for kids.
+ Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
+ which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
+ mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
+ Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
+ composing, writing, programming, etc.
  .
  This package contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like

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