[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar-toolkit-gtk3] 03/04: Modernize long descriptions.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit c980d6ab80b2855206b0976e04261383decf81f5
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Mon Apr 20 21:34:06 2015 +0200

    Modernize long descriptions.
---
 debian/control.in | 54 ++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in b/debian/control.in
index b8d0170..3e61d65 100644
--- a/debian/control.in
+++ b/debian/control.in
@@ -21,11 +21,10 @@ Recommends: libsugarext-data (= ${source:Version})
 Pre-Depends: ${cdbs:Pre-Depends},
  ${misc:Pre-Depends}
 Description: GTK3-based Sugar toolkit - runtime library
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  The sugar3 library contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like
@@ -39,11 +38,10 @@ Architecture: all
 Multi-Arch: foreign
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Description: GTK3-based Sugar toolkit - common files
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  The sugar3 library contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like
@@ -60,11 +58,10 @@ Depends: ${cdbs:Depends},
  ${misc:Depends},
  libsugarext0 (= ${binary:Version})
 Description: GTK3-based Sugar toolkit - development files
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  The sugar3 library contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like
@@ -79,11 +76,10 @@ Architecture: any
 Depends: ${misc:Depends},
  libsugarext0 (= ${binary:Version}),
 Description: GTK3-based Sugar toolkit - debugging symbols
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  The sugar3 library contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like
@@ -103,11 +99,10 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
 Description: GTK3-based Sugar toolkit - Python bindings
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  The sugar3 library contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like
@@ -123,11 +118,10 @@ Depends: ${cdbs:Depends},
  ${misc:Depends}
 Breaks: ${cdbs:Breaks}
 Description: GTK3-based Sugar toolkit - GObject introspection
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  The sugar3 library contains a set of widgets to build HIG compliant
  applications and interfaces to interact with system services like

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