[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar] 02/07: Modernize short and long descriptions.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit d3970cca2b0ee1f38025f005b2648517c9fe6662
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Wed Apr 22 20:47:19 2015 +0200

    Modernize short and long descriptions.
---
 debian/control.in.in | 40 +++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in.in b/debian/control.in.in
index 856e196..cf9d81c 100644
--- a/debian/control.in.in
+++ b/debian/control.in.in
@@ -23,12 +23,11 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
  ${python:Provides}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: Sugar graphical shell - Sucrose __BRANCH__
- Sugar is a graphical user interface aimed at children.
- .
- Originating as integral part of the OLPC "XO" a.k.a. the $100 laptop,
- Sugar has since grown into a more widely usable low-ressource desktop
- environment for kids.
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - Sucrose __BRANCH__
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  This package depends on all packages which make up Sucrose, the
  official base Sugar environment.
@@ -46,12 +45,11 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
 Breaks: ${cdbs:Breaks}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: Sugar graphical shell - window manager
- Sugar is a graphical user interface aimed at children.
- .
- Originating as integral part of the OLPC "XO" a.k.a. the $100 laptop,
- Sugar has since grown into a more widely usable low-ressource desktop
- environment for kids.
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - window manager
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  This package contains the integrated session and window manager Sugar.
 
@@ -69,16 +67,16 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
 Breaks: ${cdbs:Breaks}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: Sugar graphical shell - library
- Sugar is a graphical user interface aimed at children.
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - graphical shell
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
- Originating as integral part of the OLPC "XO" a.k.a. the $100 laptop,
- Sugar has since grown into a more widely usable low-ressource desktop
- environment for kids.
+ "Jarabe" is Spanish for "Jelly" - a sugary layer spread on the surface.
  .
- This package contains Jarabe, the Sugar Graphical "Shell" Interface
- providing the shell-level operations for Sugar.  It interacts heavily
- with the Sugar UI libraries.
+ This package contains the parts of Sugar Learning Platform immediately
+ visible to the user - the views, the journal, and the control panel.
  .
- This is a "graphical" shell, the name does not refer to a command-line
+ This is a graphical shell, the name does not refer to a command-line
  "shell" interface.

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