[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar-datastore] 01/05: Modernize short and long description.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit 70dbf9f7b20f0d3f5f428ffb0949ac72481d9885
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Wed Apr 22 21:37:27 2015 +0200

    Modernize short and long description.
---
 debian/control.in.in | 11 +++++------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in.in b/debian/control.in.in
index d368853..af607c9 100644
--- a/debian/control.in.in
+++ b/debian/control.in.in
@@ -24,12 +24,11 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
 Breaks: ${cdbs:Breaks}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: Sugar graphical shell - datastore
- Sugar is a graphical user interface aimed at children.
- .
- Originating as integral part of the OLPC "XO" a.k.a. the $100 laptop,
- Sugar has since grown into a more widely usable low-ressource desktop
- environment for kids.
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - datastore
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  This package contains a simple log like datastore able to connect with
  multiple backends.  The datastore supports connecting and disconnecting

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