[Pkg-sugar-commit] [sugar-base] 01/09: Modernize short and long description.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit 0062adbab56b94cf76f176787082eba823eabcce
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Wed Apr 22 20:58:38 2015 +0200

    Modernize short and long description.
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 debian/control.in | 11 +++++------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control.in b/debian/control.in
index 402694e..0124986 100644
--- a/debian/control.in
+++ b/debian/control.in
@@ -22,12 +22,11 @@ Provides: ${cdbs:Provides},
  ${python:Provides}
 Conflicts: ${cdbs:Conflicts}
 Replaces: ${cdbs:Replaces}
-Description: Sugar graphical shell - legacy core functionality
- Sugar is a desktop environment. It is conceived as a platform upon
- which children learn with Sugar Activities. The platform provides
- mechanisms for collaboration, reflection, and exploration. Sugar
- Activities cover a broad range of applications: browsing, drawing,
- composing, writing, programming, etc.
+Description: Sugar Learning Platform - legacy core functionality
+ Sugar Learning Platform promotes collaborative learning through Sugar
+ Activities that encourage critical thinking, the heart of a quality
+ education.  Designed from the ground up especially for children, Sugar
+ offers an alternative to traditional “office-desktop” software.
  .
  This package contains some deprecated yet still widely used base
  modules for Sugar.  Please use python-sugar3 instead where possible.

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