[Pkg-sysvinit-commits] r1712 - sysvinit/trunk/debian

[Petter Reinholdtsen]

Author: pere
Date: 2009-09-04 19:10:29 +0000 (Fri, 04 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 1712

Modified:
   sysvinit/trunk/debian/sysv-rc.templates
Log:
Try to improve text even more.

Modified: sysvinit/trunk/debian/sysv-rc.templates
===================================================================
--- sysvinit/trunk/debian/sysv-rc.templates	2009-09-04 19:03:19 UTC (rev 1711)
+++ sysvinit/trunk/debian/sysv-rc.templates	2009-09-04 19:10:29 UTC (rev 1712)
@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
 Default: true
 _Description: Migrate legacy boot sequencing to dependency based sequencing?
  The boot system is prepared to migrate to dependency based sequencing.
- It is recommended to migrate in order to enhance the boot system for the
- following reasons:
+ It is recommended to migrate for the following reasons:
  .
   * the order of boot and shutdown is calculated dynamically, using
     dependency information declared within each init.d script, which
-    ensures optimum boot sequence for the set of installed packages
+    ensures optimum and correct boot sequence for the set of installed
+    packages
   * protection against problems introduced by new or upgraded packages
     by preserving the boot sequence when problems are detected; the boot
     sequence is only modified if it is safe to do so
@@ -36,9 +36,9 @@
 Template: sysv-rc/unable-to-convert
 Type: note
 _Description: Unable to migrate to dependency based boot system
- Tests have determined that problems in the boot system exist which prevent
- migration to dependency based boot sequencing. It is recommended to migrate
- in order to enhance the boot system for the following reasons:
+ Tests have determined that problems in the boot system exist which
+ prevent migration to dependency based boot sequencing. It is
+ recommended to migrate for the following reasons:
  .
   * the order of boot and shutdown is calculated dynamically, using
     dependency information declared within each init.d script, which