[Pkg-voip-commits] [janus] 16/37: Rewrite short and long descriptions to skip superfluous or advertising phrases and correct minor syntactical flaws.

[Jonas Smedegaard]

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commit 31a5132a35b8034634f77987f989a00a06714fc4
Author: Jonas Smedegaard <dr at jones.dk>
Date:   Sun Mar 12 16:51:07 2017 +0100

    Rewrite short and long descriptions to skip superfluous or advertising phrases and correct minor syntactical flaws.
---
 debian/control | 26 ++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 1f05f04..7a6d2aa 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -36,28 +36,26 @@ Depends:
  lsb-base (>= 3.0-6),
  ${misc:Depends},
  ${shlibs:Depends},
-Description: Open Source, general purpose, WebRTC gateway
- The Janus WebRTC Gateway has been conceived as a general purpose gateway
- designed and developed by Meetecho.
+Description: general purpose WebRTC gateway
+ Janus is a general purpose WebRTC Gateway with a minimal footprint.
  .
- As such, it doesn't provide any functionality per se other than implementing
+ As such, it provides no functionality per se other than implementing
  the means to set up a WebRTC media communication with a browser,
- exchanging JSON messages with it, and relaying RTP/RTCP and messages between
- browsers and the server-side application logic they're attached to.
- Any specific feature/application needs to be implemented in server side
- plugins, that browsers can then contact via the gateway to take advantage of
- the functionality they provide.
+ exchanging JSON messages with it, and relaying RTP/RTCP and messages
+ between browsers and the server-side application logic they are
+ attached to. Any specific feature/application are implemented in server
+ side plugins, that browsers contact via the gateway to take advantage
+ of the functionality they provide.
  .
- Example of such plugins can be implementations of applications like echo
- tests, conference bridges, media recorders, SIP gateways and the like.
+ Example uses for Janus are applications involving echo tests,
+ conference bridges, media recorders, and SIP gateways.
 
 Package: janus-dev
 Architecture: any
 Depends:
  janus (=${binary:Version}),
  ${misc:Depends},
-Description: Open Source, general purpose, WebRTC gateway - development files
- The Janus WebRTC Gateway has been conceived as a general purpose gateway
- designed and developed by Meetecho.
+Description: general purpose WebRTC gateway - development files
+ Janus is a general purpose WebRTC Gateway with a minimal footprint.
  .
  This package contains headers for plugin development.

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