[Reproducible-commits] [blog] 01/02: some rewordings

[Holger Levsen]

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Author: Holger Levsen <holger at layer-acht.org>
Date:   Wed Apr 27 12:24:35 2016 +0200

    some rewordings
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 README | 17 +++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README b/README
index 00606ba..50b6cc4 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 README
 ------
 
-This file should describe the needed steps to publish the weekly reports on
-our blog.
+This file describes the needed steps to publish the weekly reports on our
+blog. (It also explains how to do personal blog posts at the bottom.)
 
-The idea is to inform and update the project and everyone who is curious about
-the progress we are making. Also it highlights this is a team effort and
-credits the many people who help towards our goals.
+The idea of the weekly reports is to inform and update the project and
+everyone who is curious about the progress we are making. Also it highlights
+this is a team effort and credits the many people who help towards our goals.
 
 Basically what need's to be done each week is:
 - do the 9 steps with tool support to create the basic template.mdwn for this
@@ -59,9 +59,10 @@ Voila. Once it's in posts/ and has been pushed it will automatically show up
 on http://planet.debian.org - yay!
 
 
-Local previews before commit
-----------------------------
-It's easy to preview before commiting changes:
+Doing local previews before committing to git
+---------------------------------------------
+
+It's easy to preview before commiting changes, just run:
 	make
 	make serve
 	# point your webbrowser to http://localhost:8000

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