[Reproducible-commits] [blog] 01/02: convert more draft style wordings to proper sentences

[Holger Levsen]

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commit 2e82d0f113374f634960cad347f3d307ccd06e6e
Author: Holger Levsen <holger at layer-acht.org>
Date:   Mon May 16 15:09:02 2016 +0200

    convert more draft style wordings to proper sentences
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 drafts/55.mdwn | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/55.mdwn b/drafts/55.mdwn
index 5195ed9..3c6712d 100644
--- a/drafts/55.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/55.mdwn
@@ -61,10 +61,9 @@ tests.reproducible-builds.org
 Misc.
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- * [https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/) has been cleaned up by Ximin Luo, which included the removal of the link from diffoscope.git to debbindiff.git.
+ * [https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/) has been cleaned up by Ximin Luo, including the removal of the link from diffoscope.git to debbindiff.git.
 
- * < dank> w00t!  "sudo add-apt-repository ppa:dank/dpkg; sudo apt-get update; sudo apt-get install dpkg" is enough for me on ubuntu 16.04 to get a reproducible build in same directory of a random C++ package.
-   * mail about ubuntu dpkg ppa: https://lists.reproducible-builds.org/pipermail/rb-general/2016-May/000039.html
+ * Dan Kegel sent a mail to report about his experiments with a [reproducible dpkg PPA for Ubuntu](https://lists.reproducible-builds.org/pipermail/rb-general/2016-May/000039.html). According to him `sudo add-apt-repository ppa:dank/dpkg && sudo apt-get update && sudo apt-get install dpkg` should be enough to get reproducible builds on Ubuntu 16.04.
 
 This week's edition was written by… and reviewed by a bunch of Reproducible builds folks on IRC.
 

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