[Reproducible-commits] [blog] 01/01: 59: tweak wording slightly based on others' suggestions

[Ximin Luo]

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Author: Ximin Luo <infinity0 at debian.org>
Date:   Thu Jun 16 09:29:30 2016 +0200

    59: tweak wording slightly based on others' suggestions
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 posts/59.mdwn | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/posts/59.mdwn b/posts/59.mdwn
index a90ac0a..e6ded09 100644
--- a/posts/59.mdwn
+++ b/posts/59.mdwn
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Documentation update
   control which cases of embedded timestamps should obey `SOURCE_DATE_EPOCH`.
   They were not convinced by our arguments on why this is a bad idea, so we
   agreed on an environment variable `FORCE_SOURCE_DATE` for them to implement
-  their desired behaviour - neutrally-named, so that at least we can set it
+  their desired behaviour - named generically, so that at least we can set it
   centrally. For more details, see the text just linked. However, we strongly
   urge most build tools *not* to use this, and instead obey `SOURCE_DATE_EPOCH`
   *unconditionally in all cases*.
@@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ build-dependencies:
 [[!pkg tircd]]
 [[!pkg xbs]]
 
-The following 5 packages are new in Debian and appear to be reproducible, but
-we'd need more data to be sure:
+The following 5 packages are new in Debian and appear to be reproducible so
+far, based on the small amount of data we have:
 [[!pkg golang-github-bowery-prompt]]
 [[!pkg golang-github-pkg-errors]]
 [[!pkg golang-gopkg-dancannon-gorethink.v2]]

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