[Reproducible-commits] [blog] 01/01: Fix spelling and minor phrasing issues

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commit 659812f256d53d14f6482660b55a06f836d4952f
Author: Ceridwen <ceridwenv at gmail.com>
Date:   Wed Jul 20 10:43:49 2016 -0400

    Fix spelling and minor phrasing issues
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 drafts/62.mdwn | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/62.mdwn b/drafts/62.mdwn
index 3a3132d..77928b1 100644
--- a/drafts/62.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/62.mdwn
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 What happened in the [Reproducible
 Builds](https://wiki.debian.org/ReproducibleBuilds) effort between June 26th and July 2nd 2016:
 
-Read on to find out why we lag some weeks behind…!
+Read on to find out why we're lagging some weeks behind…!
 
 GSoC and Outreachy updates
 --------------------------
@@ -39,17 +39,17 @@ statistics for this week. We might publish them in a future report, or we might
 switch to a format where we summarize them more (and which we can create (even) more
 automatically), we'll see.
 
-We are doing these weekly statistics because we believe it's very appropriate and
+We are doing these weekly statistics because we believe it's appropriate and
 useful to credit people's work and make it more visible. What do you think? We would
 love to hear your thoughts on this matter! Do you read these statistics? Somewhat?
 
 Actually, thanks to the power of [[!pkg notmuch]], Holger came up with what you can
-see below, so what's missing for this week are the uploads fixing unreprodubilities.
+see below, so what's missing for this week are the uploads fixing irreprodubilities.
 Which we really would like to show for the reasons stated above and because we really
 really need these uploads to happen ;-)
 
 But then we also like to confirm the bugs are really gone, which (atm) requires manual
-checking and we also like to look for the words "reproducible" and "deterministic"
+checking, and to look for the words "reproducible" and "deterministic"
 (and spelling variations) in debian/changelogs of all uploads, to spot reproducible work
 not tracked via the BTS.
 
@@ -167,4 +167,3 @@ Misc.
 -----
 
 This week's edition was written by Mattia Rizzolo, Reiner Herrmann, Ceridwen and Holger Levsen and reviewed by a bunch of Reproducible builds folks on IRC.
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