[Reproducible-commits] [reproducible-website] 07/55: Improve wording of the front page

[Chris Lamb]

This is an automated email from the git hooks/post-receive script.

lamby pushed a commit to branch master
in repository reproducible-website.

commit ba7f69de21fe6cc7d8192ff0829aa82c11c3114e
Author: David Bremner <bremner at debian.org>
Date:   Sat Oct 31 21:57:29 2015 +0100

    Improve wording of the front page
---
 index.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index a9c010e..08dac43 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -50,11 +50,11 @@ layout: home
       What made the recent <a style="text-decoration: none;"
       href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Volkswagen_emissions_scandal">Volkswagen
       emissions scandal</a> possible is software that has been designed to lie
-      about its sensors in a lab environment. If the source code had been under
-      public scrutiny, it would have been hard to add such a misfeature… or?
-      Without <em>reproducible builds</em>, it is hard to attest than the
-      binary code running in the car was actually made using the source code
-      that has been verified.
+      about its sensors in a lab environment. Having the source code under
+      public scrutiny would have made adding such a misfeature only a little
+      more difficult. Without <em>reproducible builds</em>, it is hard to
+      attest than the binary code running in the car was actually made using
+      the source code that has been verified.
     </p>
     <p>
       <a href="/who/"><strong>Several free software projects</strong></a>

-- 
Alioth's /usr/local/bin/git-commit-notice on /srv/git.debian.org/git/reproducible/reproducible-website.git