[blog] 02/02: 73: some minor wording fixes

[Ximin Luo]

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commit c0a3a6b62d14681684711ca13e6b09925c71d848
Author: Ximin Luo <infinity0 at debian.org>
Date:   Tue Sep 20 13:44:52 2016 +0200

    73: some minor wording fixes
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 drafts/73.mdwn | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drafts/73.mdwn b/drafts/73.mdwn
index 850aeff..98f3863 100644
--- a/drafts/73.mdwn
+++ b/drafts/73.mdwn
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ Toolchain developments
 ----------------------
 
 Ximin Luo started a new series of tools called (for now)
-[debrepatch](https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/reproducible/debrepatch.git/), the
-purpose being to make it easy to check that our old patches for reproducibility
-still apply to newer versions of those packages - and make them reproducible.
+[debrepatch](https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/reproducible/debrepatch.git/), to
+make it easier to automate checks that our old patches to Debian packages still
+apply to newer versions of those packages, and still make these reproducible.
 
 Ximin Luo updated one of our few remaining patches for dpkg in [[!bug 787980]]
 to make it cleaner and more minimal.
 
-The following tools were fixed to output reproducible output:
+The following tools were fixed to produce reproducible output:
 
  * [[!pkg naturaldocs]]/1.51-2 by Petter Reinholdtsen, [[!patch 831377]] by Chris Lamb.
 
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ included
 [contributions](https://anonscm.debian.org/git/reproducible/disorderfs.git/log/?h=0.5.1)
 from:
 
-- Andrew Ayer and Chris Lamb
+- Andrew Ayer and Chris Lamb:
   - Support relative paths for ROOTDIR; it no longer needs to be an absolute path.
 - Chris Lamb:
   - Print the behaviour (shuffle/reverse/sort) on startup to stdout.
@@ -138,4 +138,5 @@ from:
 Misc.
 -----
 
-This week's edition was written by Ximin Luo and reviewed by a bunch of Reproducible Builds folks on IRC.
+This week's edition was written by Ximin Luo and reviewed by a bunch of
+Reproducible Builds folks on IRC.

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