[presentations] 02/02: improve language

[Holger Levsen]

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commit 15a68a4c57cfaa5cecfa8062e62e5e8fdeccfab0
Author: Holger Levsen <holger at layer-acht.org>
Date:   Wed Oct 12 15:12:37 2016 +0200

    improve language
---
 2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit.tex | 8 ++++----
 2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/notes                         | 1 +
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit.tex b/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit.tex
index 14e8e30..28a0da2 100644
--- a/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit.tex
+++ b/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit.tex
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ from a given source}
  \frametitle{about OpenWrt and LEDE}
 
  \begin{itemize}
-  \item In this talk we'll ignore the differences,
+  \item In this talk we'll ignore the distinction between the two:
   \item when we say "OpenWrt" me mean "LEDE and OpenWrt",
   \item when we say "LEDE" me mean "OpenWrt and LEDE",
   \item when we say "OpenWrt and LEDE" we mean "LEDE and OpenWrt".
@@ -297,10 +297,10 @@ from a given source}
  \begin{itemize}
   \item CVE-2002-0083: remote root exploit in \texttt{sshd}, a single bit difference in the binary
   \item<2-5> 31c3 talk had a live demo with a kernel module modifying source code in memory only
-  \item<3-5> financial incentives to crack developer machines or a projects
+  \item<3-5> How can you be sure what's running on your machine or on a build
+  daemon network connected to the net? Do you ever leave your computers physically alone?
+  \item<4-5> Huge financial incentives to crack developer machines or a projects
   build infrastructure…
-  \item<4-5> {how can you be sure what's running on your machine or on a build
-  daemon network? Do you ever leave your} \only<4>{USB3 ports alone?}\only<5>{computers alone?}
  \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
diff --git a/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/notes b/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/notes
index 4db7976..a3d55bc 100644
--- a/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/notes
+++ b/2016-10-13-OpenWrt-Summit/notes
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@ notes for openwrt/lede talk…
 	emphasize
 		we want to change what we are building to make *you* look at these pages every day
 		we can build openwrt + lede at least every day, thanks profitbricks!
+		we can build more branches…
 		100% now (show screenshot) but what variations are missing? list them and list current results
 	drop intro h+l
 	skip demo

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