[reproducible-website] 03/03: Cosmetic grammar improvements to Berlin 2016 page.

[Chris Lamb]

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commit 816c21e7c5ae2d696158058bfa2432c3b0658dec
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Sun Nov 6 19:23:18 2016 +0000

    Cosmetic grammar improvements to Berlin 2016 page.
---
 _events/berlin2016.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_events/berlin2016.html b/_events/berlin2016.html
index ab81950..a23634f 100644
--- a/_events/berlin2016.html
+++ b/_events/berlin2016.html
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@ event_summary: Three day follow-up workshop to Athens 2015 to continue and grow
 <div class="row">
   <div class="four columns"> </div>
   <div class="eight columns text">
-    <p>{{ page.event_date_string }}</p>
+    <p>{{ page.event_date_string }}.</p>
     <p>{{ page.event_summary }}</p>
     <p>As a follow up to the first reproducible builds workshop in
       <a href="{{ "/events/athens2015/" | prepend: site.baseurl }}">Athens 2015</a>,
-      reproducible builds folks meet again.
+      the reproducible builds folks will meet again in Berlin.
     </p>
   </div>
 </div>
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ event_summary: Three day follow-up workshop to Athens 2015 to continue and grow
   </div>
   <div class="eight columns text">
     <p>
-      The exact content of the meeting is going to be shaped by the
-      participants, but here are the main goals:
+      The exact content of the meeting will be shaped by the participants, but
+      here are the main goals:
     </p>
     <ul>
       <li>Update & exchange about the status of reproducible builds in various projects.</li>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ event_summary: Three day follow-up workshop to Athens 2015 to continue and grow
   </div>
   <div class="eight columns text">
     <p>
-      Represented projects: <em>TBA</em>.<br />Registration needed. Please contact <a href="mailto:holger at layer-acht.org">Holger</a> if you would like to attend.
+      Represented projects: <em>TBA</em>.<br />Registration required. Please contact <a href="mailto:holger at layer-acht.org">Holger</a> if you would like to attend.
     </p>
   </div>
 </div>

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